Birdwatchers Win
Two line essence poem9 total reviews
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice image and presentation, Crystie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-We love seeing the birds at our feeder
and hearing them chatter in the trees.
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the blue jays
as they bustle, and very good imagery
describing a snowy day going by
a little faster because of the blue jay.
-Very well done.
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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-Very nice image and presentation, Crystie.
-Your notes are appreciated.
-We love seeing the birds at our feeder
and hearing them chatter in the trees.
-You did a good job with the form.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Good description of the blue jays
as they bustle, and very good imagery
describing a snowy day going by
a little faster because of the blue jay.
-Very well done.
Comment Written 08-May-2024
reply by the author on 08-May-2024
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Thank you for your kind review, even when it wasn't even promoted. Hope you have a great day. I am off to feed my little parakeets next.
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You are very welcome. Have a good evening and rest of your week. Enjoy your parakeets, too!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh, I agree with your notes -- it is a winning pastime. I enjoyed this two-line poem very much (as you can imagine I did -- LOL). I especially love bluejays too -- I had one steal a peanut within a couple of feet from me. The peanuts were meant for the squirrels I was feeding! Hahahaha!
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Oh, I agree with your notes -- it is a winning pastime. I enjoyed this two-line poem very much (as you can imagine I did -- LOL). I especially love bluejays too -- I had one steal a peanut within a couple of feet from me. The peanuts were meant for the squirrels I was feeding! Hahahaha!
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your personalized review. Yeah, those blue jays can be funny little thieves. I think in the winter they are always dropping peanut shells in our yard from some neighbor's bird feeder. Or maybe it's the magpies. Those are the only birds who are brave enough to perch in our trees once in a while, due to our having a couple of cats. Thanks for reviewing!
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from patcelaw
this is a very nice two line poem for the contest. You have presented it well and it reads well when it's read aloud I wish you the very best with the contest and I also wish you the best with your writing. Patricia It
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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this is a very nice two line poem for the contest. You have presented it well and it reads well when it's read aloud I wish you the very best with the contest and I also wish you the best with your writing. Patricia It
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your super nice comments and review.
Comment from judiverse
What a sweet picture of the blue jay. The birds are a reminder of spring. We want to put winter behind us, and the blue jay puts us in the right framd of mind. These essence poems are so hard to write. The judges surely have a hard time judging them as they're going to be so similar because of the requirements and restrictions. Your poem certainly fits the bill when it comes to correct format. Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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What a sweet picture of the blue jay. The birds are a reminder of spring. We want to put winter behind us, and the blue jay puts us in the right framd of mind. These essence poems are so hard to write. The judges surely have a hard time judging them as they're going to be so similar because of the requirements and restrictions. Your poem certainly fits the bill when it comes to correct format. Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for stopping by to read and review. You always seem to have gracious reviews.
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You're very welcome and thanks for the kind words. judi
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
The poem is rather nicely done. You speak a complete thought. Little poems are a pain to do but so satisfying when you are done. The picture is very good. Karen
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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The poem is rather nicely done. You speak a complete thought. Little poems are a pain to do but so satisfying when you are done. The picture is very good. Karen
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your great review of this very short poem.
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:-)
Comment from royowen
This is an excellent post and a great entry in this poetry contest. You've done a smack up job with this, the conditions are cleverly scribed, and a terrific post in place, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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This is an excellent post and a great entry in this poetry contest. You've done a smack up job with this, the conditions are cleverly scribed, and a terrific post in place, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your great review and kind comments.
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Most welcome
Comment from lyenochka
Hooray for birdwatching! I'm glad that those "long, snowed-in days" are hustling out of here and the bords are singing their little hearts out. Great essence form. Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Hooray for birdwatching! I'm glad that those "long, snowed-in days" are hustling out of here and the bords are singing their little hearts out. Great essence form. Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your enthusiastic review. Sometimes we get snow even in June in Utah. I think it was Father's Day just a few years back we got about a quarter inch.
Comment from Bryce 1
I dig it. It reminds me of snow days when I was a kid. I never noticed the blue jay working as hard as he or she did. Perhaps, I did though. I don't know. The poem reminded me of good beautiful times.
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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I dig it. It reminds me of snow days when I was a kid. I never noticed the blue jay working as hard as he or she did. Perhaps, I did though. I don't know. The poem reminded me of good beautiful times.
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you so much for your personalized review.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
These are sweet words to describe this little guy full of bustle as these birds are busy surviving in the winter, a fine presentation for the contest Crystie, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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These are sweet words to describe this little guy full of bustle as these birds are busy surviving in the winter, a fine presentation for the contest Crystie, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 24-Apr-2024
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Thank you for your super review and taking time to comment.
