Anger
an emotional eruption13 total reviews
Comment from Sarita Méndez
Your lines perfectly describe the way I see someone's anger, the idea of the erupting volcano is very good.
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Your lines perfectly describe the way I see someone's anger, the idea of the erupting volcano is very good.
Thank you for sharing and good luck for the contest.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 03-May-2024
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Thank you, Sarita. I appreciate your review.
Comment from Nicola Barron
This is such a sad poem as it is the reality of the breakdown of communication in relationships and marriages, holding feelings inside over periods of time and builds up and up, 'a dormant volcano' until it becomes toxic and ready to explode. Very well written, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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This is such a sad poem as it is the reality of the breakdown of communication in relationships and marriages, holding feelings inside over periods of time and builds up and up, 'a dormant volcano' until it becomes toxic and ready to explode. Very well written, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you, Nicola, for your review. I appreciate the feedback.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Wow! Your poem is wonderfully crafted. You capture the intensity of her anger and the destructive power of her emotions. The metaphor of anger as a dormant volcano is especially effective. You do a wonderful job of sharing a sense of something powerful and uncontrollable simmering beneath the surface. That said, the progression from simmering to eruption is perfect. I thought the destruction of the home they had built together was sad. But perfect in bringing this all together. This was a wonderfully crafted poem that shares the raw emotion of her experience. This poem stands out which is why I'm giving it six stars. Well deserved!
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Wow! Your poem is wonderfully crafted. You capture the intensity of her anger and the destructive power of her emotions. The metaphor of anger as a dormant volcano is especially effective. You do a wonderful job of sharing a sense of something powerful and uncontrollable simmering beneath the surface. That said, the progression from simmering to eruption is perfect. I thought the destruction of the home they had built together was sad. But perfect in bringing this all together. This was a wonderfully crafted poem that shares the raw emotion of her experience. This poem stands out which is why I'm giving it six stars. Well deserved!
Comment Written 02-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thank you, Michael, for such a great review. I really appreciate the generous six stars.
Comment from BethShelby
This poem definitely show a lot of emotion and should do well in the emotional poetry contest. People show hold on to their emotions for a long period allow it to build until at some poem it erupts in such a way the damage it does is beyond repair.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This poem definitely show a lot of emotion and should do well in the emotional poetry contest. People show hold on to their emotions for a long period allow it to build until at some poem it erupts in such a way the damage it does is beyond repair.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Beth, for your insightful comments.
Comment from Idawiesenfeld
This poem represents anger in an amazing way. Intense imaginary makes us see the eruptions happening as though happening now. This a great poem in which many people can look up too. Good job!!
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This poem represents anger in an amazing way. Intense imaginary makes us see the eruptions happening as though happening now. This a great poem in which many people can look up too. Good job!!
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thanks so much for a super review.
Comment from Faith Williams
Great visuals with your strong word choices--simmered, sizzled, steamed. I can feel the emotion running through your poem, the tension before blowing up. Amazing and well done. Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Great visuals with your strong word choices--simmered, sizzled, steamed. I can feel the emotion running through your poem, the tension before blowing up. Amazing and well done. Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Faith, for such encouraging words and for the six stars. I really appreciate your feedback.
Comment from nancyjam
Excellent poetic image for the anger felt after one's trust is broken.
Terrific imagery throughout. Strong word choice. A wonderful entry
for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Good luck.
Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Excellent poetic image for the anger felt after one's trust is broken.
Terrific imagery throughout. Strong word choice. A wonderful entry
for the Emotions Poetry Contest. Good luck.
Nancy
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024
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Thank you, Nancy, for such a super review.
Comment from Wendy G
Wow. A vivid picture of the emotion of anger, and its inevitable consequences. Excellent comparison with a volcanic eruption! To me, it is a winning entry, and I wish you success.
Wendy
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Wow. A vivid picture of the emotion of anger, and its inevitable consequences. Excellent comparison with a volcanic eruption! To me, it is a winning entry, and I wish you success.
Wendy
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Wendy, for your vote of confidence for this piece.
Comment from Carol Clark2
This is a great metaphor. I love that you used a volcano to represent her angry eruption. When anger remains dormant for a while, it often erupts rather forcefully with just a slight provocation. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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This is a great metaphor. I love that you used a volcano to represent her angry eruption. When anger remains dormant for a while, it often erupts rather forcefully with just a slight provocation. Best wishes in the contest. Carol
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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Thanks, Carol, for this encouraging review.
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You're welcome. Blessings as you finish writing your final poems for the contest.
Comment from Sally Law
The scripture: A wise woman builds her house. But a foolish woman, tears it down with her own hands. That seems to be the case with Mrs. Molten Hot. Wonderfully crafted and illustrated for the emotions contest. I felt it.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xo
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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The scripture: A wise woman builds her house. But a foolish woman, tears it down with her own hands. That seems to be the case with Mrs. Molten Hot. Wonderfully crafted and illustrated for the emotions contest. I felt it.
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming contest.
Sal Xo
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024
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I always appreciate your feedback. Thanks, Sally.
