Dandelions
Crescendo Poem.21 total reviews
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
I
Liked it
You did well
The font is nice
The picture is grand
Colorful matting shines
Poetry remains first-rate
Was this work very hard to do
This is taxing my poor brain a bit
Maximum efforts are required by me
Shall I face up to this monumental task
Will I fold up my tent and go home after all
How long did all this take you I wonder to myself
Kudos to you my dear it was fun, but very hard work
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You got my brain working overtime. You did good work. They ought to call this "The stairs" :-)
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I
Liked it
You did well
The font is nice
The picture is grand
Colorful matting shines
Poetry remains first-rate
Was this work very hard to do
This is taxing my poor brain a bit
Maximum efforts are required by me
Shall I face up to this monumental task
Will I fold up my tent and go home after all
How long did all this take you I wonder to myself
Kudos to you my dear it was fun, but very hard work
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You got my brain working overtime. You did good work. They ought to call this "The stairs" :-)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much. Yes it was not easy since J prefer lawless in.poems.Smile
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Santha,
The color scheme, the words and the artwork all work to present this poem well. It describes how dandelions take over and add beauty and hope even though they are weeds,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Hi Santha,
The color scheme, the words and the artwork all work to present this poem well. It describes how dandelions take over and add beauty and hope even though they are weeds,
Keep writing and stay healthy
Joan
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
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You are most kindly welcome, Santha.
Joan
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
This is a lovely Crescendo poem with vivid descriptions that create mental imagery for the reader. The artwork is perect for the poem and adds to the presentation of the piece. thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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This is a lovely Crescendo poem with vivid descriptions that create mental imagery for the reader. The artwork is perect for the poem and adds to the presentation of the piece. thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from jaded831
A delightful read. You brought me back to my childhood, when I took the time to indulge in simple pleasures. I do think road sides is one word. Your picture compliments your poem beautifully.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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A delightful read. You brought me back to my childhood, when I took the time to indulge in simple pleasures. I do think road sides is one word. Your picture compliments your poem beautifully.
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from gansach
A very enjoyable crescendo poem for the competition. I love dandelions and the accompanying artwork is beautiful, a perfect illustration. The syllable progression is correct, the poem flows nicely. Very good effort. Best wishes!
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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A very enjoyable crescendo poem for the competition. I love dandelions and the accompanying artwork is beautiful, a perfect illustration. The syllable progression is correct, the poem flows nicely. Very good effort. Best wishes!
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much. It is a club entry not acontest .
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Okay, thanks for letting me know!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Excellent entry for the crescendo poem challenge in the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Excellent entry for the crescendo poem challenge in the Japanese poetry club. Good syllables count and connection between lines. The presentation is lovely.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much .
Comment from GoWiSt
"Dandelions" A very nice and interesting type of flower.
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Good personification of dandelions.
So, does the final line imply that we should stop wishing, as our wishes will come to nothing, but simply be buried in Mother Earth's lap? Are the dandelions giving us false hope? Interesting poem.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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"Dandelions" A very nice and interesting type of flower.
Nice complementary picture art choice.
Good personification of dandelions.
So, does the final line imply that we should stop wishing, as our wishes will come to nothing, but simply be buried in Mother Earth's lap? Are the dandelions giving us false hope? Interesting poem.
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much. 8
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love your language here, (yellow liveries), (puff balls float) and (Trooping over fields). I felt like this army of dandelions were a force to be reconned with. A fine Poem, love Dolly x x x
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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I love your language here, (yellow liveries), (puff balls float) and (Trooping over fields). I felt like this army of dandelions were a force to be reconned with. A fine Poem, love Dolly x x x
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much.
Comment from Douglas Goff
What a uniquely beautiful form of poetry!
My children absolutely love dandelions. They run to pick them whenever they see them.
That is my excuse not to mow. Hope the wife falls for it.
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reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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What a uniquely beautiful form of poetry!
My children absolutely love dandelions. They run to pick them whenever they see them.
That is my excuse not to mow. Hope the wife falls for it.
D
Comment Written 25-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Children love that or used to.Thanks for dropping by.
Comment from nancyjam
Wonderful imagery in your Crescendo poem. They are everywhere now.
as you say "In fields and along the roadside."
They add cheerful color to our world. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Nancy
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Wonderful imagery in your Crescendo poem. They are everywhere now.
as you say "In fields and along the roadside."
They add cheerful color to our world. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Nancy
Comment Written 24-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2024
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Thank you
