Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

I enjoyed your provocative and tantalising words here which are rather erotic and naughty and I wish you luck with the contest, a great post Brett, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thanks for your kind words and review :)

Comment from jessizero

Excellent

This was a little naughty, I suppose. You got the internal and ending rhymes right as was required. I also liked the picture you supplied. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 25-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks for your review and I?m
Happy you enjoyed my poem. Best wishes to you

Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

That is a fabulous two-liner entry for the competition.

Now, what is up with that photo? Does she k ow that there is a wolf creeping up on her? Open those eyes girl!

Fun read.
D

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks for the kind review 🙂✌️

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Wonderful, a very delightful bit of fun (if I remember correctly) an excellent entry for this short prompt, very well written and presented, best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks for the good wishes 🙂

Comment from HaleyRenae

Excellent

I really like the playful and seductive edge this piece has. It flows and ryhmes very well and definitely catches a person's attention. Good job and thank you for sharing!

 Comment Written 24-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Apr-2024

Thanks for constructive and kind review 🙂