The Kristen Recipe
How To Make A Kristen2 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
I like the concept of the poem. At first I found it somewhat difficult to read because I felt like the flow wasn't there..I'd have liked to hear more references of "recipe vocabulary" which may have connected it all together, a little more uniformly. Keep writing..good job
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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I like the concept of the poem. At first I found it somewhat difficult to read because I felt like the flow wasn't there..I'd have liked to hear more references of "recipe vocabulary" which may have connected it all together, a little more uniformly. Keep writing..good job
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from Jesse James Doty
This is cute and clever and does a person justice when it comes to a recipe for making you. I love this although it is a little cutesy it gets the point across. So bring it on and then some. Make due for all the people who eat people or other creatures but have no recipe for the cooking.
Jesse
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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This is cute and clever and does a person justice when it comes to a recipe for making you. I love this although it is a little cutesy it gets the point across. So bring it on and then some. Make due for all the people who eat people or other creatures but have no recipe for the cooking.
Jesse
Comment Written 26-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 26-Apr-2024
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Thank you very much!
