Comment from tempeste

Excellent

Ciao poet, you now have 2 votes.

I love nature themed poems but seeing they are very popular , especially sunsets , to find something that stands out is hard.

You did just that .

A creative and unique description of a sunset reflected on the still waters of a channel.

I love sun's dip sets...
it made me think of sun's fingertip.

Best of luck!

PS: just read you took the stunning photo !

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024

Thank you

Comment from Idawiesenfeld

Excellent

Very beautiful! I love how you talked about the sky's reflection in the water. You could maybe talk more about the sky in the river. I also liked how the title links really well with the haiku. Great Job!

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you for reading and feedback.

Comment from A.C. Goldman

Excellent

Great job. I love sunsets. It's a somber take on them with that ending. "Final heartbeats" but it's nice. I don't know much about poetry but will be submitting one soon anyway

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you for reading and feedback. It is just the last heartbeats of day before night takes over. Not somber in my mind just the way it feels when you are waiting for the perfect time to take the photograph the day is dying but a new one always comes back.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is a very good 5-7-5 poem for the contest
with excellent imagery of the sunset reflected on the river's
peaceful waters.
Nicely done.
Good luck in the contest.
Robert

 Comment Written 27-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 27-Apr-2024

Thank you.