Rock it, girl, rocket
A poem about acceptance of adult transgender daughter3 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Once again, a good opener, capturing the reader's attention. Your story, well expressed in free verse, conveys the transition that then follows, not only in your child, but also in your own acknowledgement and acceptance of having a transgender daughter. This is arguably more difficult for you than for her as you understandably worry that she has done the right thing and will find her light again.
I enjoyed the succinctness of your sentiments here and the unfolding of this personal journey which you share with her.
As I'm English, I'm not familiar with the word 'grok' which I now 'understand.' It might be a good idea to put a definition in an author's note.
Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Once again, a good opener, capturing the reader's attention. Your story, well expressed in free verse, conveys the transition that then follows, not only in your child, but also in your own acknowledgement and acceptance of having a transgender daughter. This is arguably more difficult for you than for her as you understandably worry that she has done the right thing and will find her light again.
I enjoyed the succinctness of your sentiments here and the unfolding of this personal journey which you share with her.
As I'm English, I'm not familiar with the word 'grok' which I now 'understand.' It might be a good idea to put a definition in an author's note.
Well done and good luck in the contest! Debbie
Comment Written 29-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024
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Thanks! It's not that commonly used of a word but I like it.
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It's a great rhyming word!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
This is wonderful. The acceptance and unconditional love expressed throughout the poem are right there on the surface. Your poem beautifully captures the complexity and depth of emotions experienced by a parent coming to terms with who their child is. I loved the nostalgic tone. I thought it showed us cherished memories while also acknowledging the challenges of the present. This was a strong first post! So well written.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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This is wonderful. The acceptance and unconditional love expressed throughout the poem are right there on the surface. Your poem beautifully captures the complexity and depth of emotions experienced by a parent coming to terms with who their child is. I loved the nostalgic tone. I thought it showed us cherished memories while also acknowledging the challenges of the present. This was a strong first post! So well written.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thank you! That really means a lot
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Free Verse poetry contest and a nice first post. Welcome to Fanstory! Awesome poem most especially because of the support it shows for your child. I wish every child could know that kind of love and encouragement from their parents in every aspect of their lives. nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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An excellent entry for the Free Verse poetry contest and a nice first post. Welcome to Fanstory! Awesome poem most especially because of the support it shows for your child. I wish every child could know that kind of love and encouragement from their parents in every aspect of their lives. nicely done. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 28-Apr-2024
reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024
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Thanks! I appreciate it. I am not a poet and I DO know it. I am working mainly on my prose. Also, I welcome suggestions for improvement in this and anything I post!
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In Free Verse, everyone is a poet and you did very well! Try out the different poem formats and you might surprise yourself.
