Comment from Douglas Goff

Excellent

Interesting retrospective look forward. Ha!

I am sure she would love this letter.

Couple of minor issues:

also request your belief in it's origin, during the perusal of this letter.. It is sent with the sincere faith as to it's usefullness.
(double periods plus usefulness spelling unless it is a Canadian thing)

So, I've,(forgive me), included this ramble about this
(spacing)

Also I think You Tube is presented as YouTube. (Maybe double check that)

I loved rabble-ing

Great piece.
D

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2024

Thank you for your kindly helpful review. Yes. It's YouTube. The two periods are deliberate, as in showing a pause. Maybe ... would be better. Usefulness,... GAGE CANADIAN DICTIONARY, (That's how they print their title), says usefulness, one el. I tapped the spell check while writing, but it said nothing. Double el now removed. Spacing after "So I've," typo repaired. Rabble-ing. I do sometimes create a word. If we don't create them, then who will ? Thanks for the detailed check. I also tried to place all the print under Kate's photo, but it won't move from the picture-side position.

reply by Douglas Goff on 29-Apr-2024

Great piece!

Comment from Michael Ludwinder

Excellent

I thought your writing was so heartfelt. It was also an imaginative write! Imagine if we could communicate across time. You skillfully weaves together elements of science fiction with your own personal reflections. And it's so enjoyable to read! Very nicely done! This was terrific.

 Comment Written 28-Apr-2024

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reply by the author on 28-Apr-2024

Thank you for your kind review. Yes. It's something to imagine. And it was fun writing. Kind words are always welcome.