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temptation poetry submission; in the style ofsong lyrics2 total reviews
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was so creative. I love your song. Your lyrics for me seem to express a longing for freedom in a world that sometimes feels restrictive and confining. The repetition of "I want" and "I wanna" throughout the verses is powerful in sharing that. Great job.
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I thought this was so creative. I love your song. Your lyrics for me seem to express a longing for freedom in a world that sometimes feels restrictive and confining. The repetition of "I want" and "I wanna" throughout the verses is powerful in sharing that. Great job.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
The poem/song captures the complex emotions and desires of the speaker with clarity and depth. It invites reflection on the nature of freedom, self-expression, and the pursuit of fulfillment in a world that often imposes limitations and expectations. Well done!
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The poem/song captures the complex emotions and desires of the speaker with clarity and depth. It invites reflection on the nature of freedom, self-expression, and the pursuit of fulfillment in a world that often imposes limitations and expectations. Well done!
Comment Written 30-Apr-2024
