Isla de Oro: A Pirate Story
Viewing comments for Chapter 6 "The Bible"A story of bravery, faith, and family.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Thsi chapter does a wonderful job of showing tension and despair especially since they are being confined in terrible circumstances. Your descriptions and introspective reflections drew me into the journey. I could feel with the weight of the Reverend's death and the burden of feeling responsible. The interactions between the characters is well done. Especially with the quartermaster and the surgeon. This was an enjoyable chapter.
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thsi chapter does a wonderful job of showing tension and despair especially since they are being confined in terrible circumstances. Your descriptions and introspective reflections drew me into the journey. I could feel with the weight of the Reverend's death and the burden of feeling responsible. The interactions between the characters is well done. Especially with the quartermaster and the surgeon. This was an enjoyable chapter.
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :) Stay tuned for more!
Comment from royowen
There's nothing so precious as a man who sticks to his principles and denies Himself to do so, that is very valuable to men such as those that aren't used to sacrifice, beautifully written, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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There's nothing so precious as a man who sticks to his principles and denies Himself to do so, that is very valuable to men such as those that aren't used to sacrifice, beautifully written, blessings Roy
Comment Written 01-May-2024
reply by the author on 02-May-2024
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Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it :) Stay tuned for more!
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Bless you
