An Ocean of Dreams
Viewing comments for Chapter 5 "Butterfly"NaPoWriMo contest entry
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This man sounds like he has been fickle and fancy free and only settled down because of old age and I am glad you have remained friends. A clever poem and I enjoyed this entry for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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This man sounds like he has been fickle and fancy free and only settled down because of old age and I am glad you have remained friends. A clever poem and I enjoyed this entry for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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Hi Dolly, thank you for your comments and review. Love, Donna x
Comment from patcelaw
This is a very interesting poem and it surprises me a little that you referred to the men like a butterfly, but I see why you did because he fluttered around between women and women. I am glad you have that close relationship with him now. Patricia .
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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This is a very interesting poem and it surprises me a little that you referred to the men like a butterfly, but I see why you did because he fluttered around between women and women. I am glad you have that close relationship with him now. Patricia .
Comment Written 03-May-2024
reply by the author on 06-May-2024
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HiPatricia, thank you for your comments and review. Dove
