The Man
for girls, and anyone else forced to forgive3 total reviews
Comment from Douglas Goff
This was an interesting read. Most interesting. And enjoyable.
I think that you used some interesting descriptive techniques.
Thank you for sharing!
Well done!
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This was an interesting read. Most interesting. And enjoyable.
I think that you used some interesting descriptive techniques.
Thank you for sharing!
Well done!
D
Comment Written 07-May-2024
Comment from Julie Helms
Your descriptions are vivid and original:
An apology described as approaching swaggering, gives the reader a huge picture in just a few well-chosen words. Throughout you do this, setting a scene without outright saying it. This is very interesting, intriguing and creative.
Julie
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Your descriptions are vivid and original:
An apology described as approaching swaggering, gives the reader a huge picture in just a few well-chosen words. Throughout you do this, setting a scene without outright saying it. This is very interesting, intriguing and creative.
Julie
Comment Written 07-May-2024
Comment from Mark Jackson
This is a great poem great free verse. The only issue is you have saved it under prose. You should be able to fix it by going back in and Editing. However, if you have problems ask Tom to look at it by going into Community and Contact us. Good luck in the contest.
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This is a great poem great free verse. The only issue is you have saved it under prose. You should be able to fix it by going back in and Editing. However, if you have problems ask Tom to look at it by going into Community and Contact us. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 06-May-2024
