Reviews from

Listening To The Nature of God

Just listening to the nature of God

3 total reviews 
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I think I'm slightly confused. I thought a loop poem had four lines per stanza and a rhyming scheme of ABCB. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2024


reply by the author on 04-Oct-2024
    Hey there Barbara,
    Thanks for the advice! I edited it and even added another verse. Have a good day and God bless!
Comment from Nicki.B
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I think this is a very sweet and uncomplicated poem that I believe kids will enjoy because, it's worded simply with terms like soft & fluffy, and drip drop has little peoples appeal. Well done I enjoyed it

 Comment Written 14-May-2024


reply by the author on 18-May-2024
    Dear Nicola,
    I?m glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for your rating and review! God bless you!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Excellent
Not yet exceptional. When the exceptional rating is reached this is highlighted

I loved the imagery in your poem. It was so beautifu. It captures the soothing rhythm of raindrops falling. You set the mood so well. The the phrase "Drip drop" creates a gentle sound. I could hear the raindrops tapping against the surface. I love that you share the beauty of nature's wonders. I could feel God's blessings in your poem.

 Comment Written 12-May-2024


reply by the author on 18-May-2024
    I?m glad you enjoyed my poem! Thanks for the rating and review! God bless you!