Comment from LateBloomer

Excellent

Hi Gypsy, your poem made me smile. I could envision a kitty cat carefully checking out the flamingos and being confused ... hmm ... not edible ... they don't fly ... they don't move ... pretty to look at but useless to me.
A fun poem. Xo. M

 Comment Written 17-May-2024

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reply by the author on 17-May-2024

Thank you very much, M.
Have a wonderful weekend!

Gypsy

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

love flamingos! then again light pink's my fave colour lol...

this was a fun little haiku - yea i can see the cat getting bored...

good work with nice imagery and smooth flow

thank you for sharing
shelley :)

 Comment Written 13-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Thank you very much, Shelley

Gypsy

Comment from GWHARGIS

Excellent

Hahaha. This makes me think of the picture of the dog who waits for the statue of a man who is holding a ball. It shows another side of animals. This was a fun visualization. The domestic cat, in hunting mode, just waiting. Gretchen

 Comment Written 13-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Thank you very much, Gretchen

Gypsy

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Ha! Ha! I feel a bit sorry for the patient cat, though they do seem to find some very funny ways to amuse themselves, a wonderful haiku, very well written and presented****kahpot

 Comment Written 13-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Thank you very much, kym

Gypsy

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. Poor kitty! Those plastic pink flamingoes are so strange to have on a lawn but it was quite the fashion to have them at one time. They never made out to Hawaii.

 Comment Written 12-May-2024

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reply by the author on 13-May-2024

Thank you very much, big sister. Have a wonderful day

Love,

Marival

Comment from RJ Heritage

Excellent

Seen some ofvthemvon my neighbor's lawn. I never really liked them, so I can emphatize with the cat. I never liked much plastuc figurines as well. Your words about the cat was clever.
RJ

 Comment Written 12-May-2024

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reply by the author on 12-May-2024

Thank you very much, RJ

Gypsy

reply by RJ Heritage on 13-May-2024

Have a great day

Comment from juliaSjames

Excellent

Love this. I can see the cat, poised, waiting for the right moment to pounce, and waiting. Until it finally slinks away. The presentation is amazing. Those flamingos are definitely on a roll. LOL

Thanks for showing that haiku can be as ironical as senryu.

Blessings, Julia

 Comment Written 12-May-2024

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reply by the author on 12-May-2024

Thank you very much, Julia. I am happy you like it and made you smile LoL

gypsy