What Breaks My Heart
Viewing comments for Chapter 22 "Is There Anyone Who Even Cries? "Poems and stories tellin' it like I see it.
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Comment from Michael Ludwinder
I thought this was very powerful. The repetition of, "for this, is there anyone who even cries?" shows a sense of despair and disbelief at the lack of compassionate outcry in the face of horror. I like that your poem challenges us to consider our own responses in addressing these problems. Well done!
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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I thought this was very powerful. The repetition of, "for this, is there anyone who even cries?" shows a sense of despair and disbelief at the lack of compassionate outcry in the face of horror. I like that your poem challenges us to consider our own responses in addressing these problems. Well done!
Comment Written 21-May-2024
reply by the author on 21-May-2024
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Thank you. Your review and comments truly mean a great deal to me.
Comment from Iza Deleanu
Nice poem and contains lots of unknowns. Now days we choose the hide and seek tactic instead of acting for justice. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Nice poem and contains lots of unknowns. Now days we choose the hide and seek tactic instead of acting for justice. Thank you for sharing and good luck with your writings.
Comment Written 20-May-2024
reply by the author on 20-May-2024
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Thank you for reading and sharing your comments. I definitely need all the luck I can get.
