Sayonara
sayonara5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
This is a very interesting contest entry. It definitely tells a story. Thank you for sharing this this contest entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
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This is a very interesting contest entry. It definitely tells a story. Thank you for sharing this this contest entry with us. I want to wish you luck with the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from Ric Myworld
I have to say that I like the way you think. Not only about this, but on much of what you post. Although, it probably wouldn't be much fun to be your opposition. I'm glad you already have a chartreuse plus sign since I'm all out of stars for the week. Thanks for sharing.
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I have to say that I like the way you think. Not only about this, but on much of what you post. Although, it probably wouldn't be much fun to be your opposition. I'm glad you already have a chartreuse plus sign since I'm all out of stars for the week. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from Begin Again
Oh, Iza...I pray that this isn't a personal story and that you aren't really leaving us on Fanstory or worse yet... dipping out on your life. I will miss you so you must keep plugging along.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
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Oh, Iza...I pray that this isn't a personal story and that you aren't really leaving us on Fanstory or worse yet... dipping out on your life. I will miss you so you must keep plugging along.
Smiles and hugs, Carol
Comment Written 29-May-2024
Comment from lyenochka
That's possibly a sad or scary story. I'm not sure. It's also interesting that she is addressing time directly. There are times when lots of people want to say "Sayonara" to life but God has to call us Home when we have done all we were created to do. Best wishes in the contest!
scrouge Cronos. (scrooge?) I also think you mean Chronos, Time, not Cronos/Kronos, the Titan, right?
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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That's possibly a sad or scary story. I'm not sure. It's also interesting that she is addressing time directly. There are times when lots of people want to say "Sayonara" to life but God has to call us Home when we have done all we were created to do. Best wishes in the contest!
scrouge Cronos. (scrooge?) I also think you mean Chronos, Time, not Cronos/Kronos, the Titan, right?
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Hi Helen, thank you so much for the corrections and reading, maybe between the line is about me... but no worries, "I'll be back":)
Comment from Liz O'Neill
I like this image It's a metaphor plus it kind of gives us a whole sense of how she was doing. This whole description is excellent. The hourglass is a wonderful metaphor also. I have to give this an A+ Even though it's tiny and compact it is powerful.
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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I like this image It's a metaphor plus it kind of gives us a whole sense of how she was doing. This whole description is excellent. The hourglass is a wonderful metaphor also. I have to give this an A+ Even though it's tiny and compact it is powerful.
Comment Written 28-May-2024
reply by the author on 28-May-2024
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Thank you so much Liz, how are you?
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I'm doing excellent thank you Iza.
