Again ...
Fifth poem after DDay - written May 10, 20245 total reviews
Comment from Brenda Strauser
Hi Maddie, I'll pray for you. Is Boo your husband ? I'm sorry you are going through a tough time. God will give you strength to deal with this. The poem was so heartfelt. Well written, love Brenda
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
Hi Maddie, I'll pray for you. Is Boo your husband ? I'm sorry you are going through a tough time. God will give you strength to deal with this. The poem was so heartfelt. Well written, love Brenda
Comment Written 18-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2024
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Well thank you so much for your kind words, they mean a lot to both of us. Yes I call him boo a lot lol!
Thank you for the five stars they are appreciated beyond measure!
Blessings ...
Comment from Cindy Decker 3
Author, I'm sorry to hear of your plight.
Sometimes love is tested to the nth degree. I really believe true love endures.
I hope your situation changes for the better.
Your poem I and presentation are beautiful, expressing love tested to the limits.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
Author, I'm sorry to hear of your plight.
Sometimes love is tested to the nth degree. I really believe true love endures.
I hope your situation changes for the better.
Your poem I and presentation are beautiful, expressing love tested to the limits.
Good luck in the contest.
Cindy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Thanks for your sweet words. I didn't win but it's all good! The best poem won!
Thank you for the five stars. God bless;-)
Comment from royowen
I love the scripture that says God is our justifier in the end, if, in fact we are guiltless, He will come to our rescue and see that we will be ok, I love the way you have written this, this is a great write Melodie, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
I love the scripture that says God is our justifier in the end, if, in fact we are guiltless, He will come to our rescue and see that we will be ok, I love the way you have written this, this is a great write Melodie, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 17-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2024
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Wow Roy, thank you! You know I look up to you and that means the world to me that you loved the way I wrote this! I wanna be like you and Ms. Dolly one day in the poetry world!
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Bless you
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Comment from bonespur
I'm really sorry to hear that you're having to go through all this. Unfortunately, I know exactly where you're coming from. My "baby daddy" was a real POS.(not saying that about your man) but he was in and out of jail all the time and it was really hard on me too. Hope things get better for you. Good job on the poem and good luck hope you have a blessed day
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
I'm really sorry to hear that you're having to go through all this. Unfortunately, I know exactly where you're coming from. My "baby daddy" was a real POS.(not saying that about your man) but he was in and out of jail all the time and it was really hard on me too. Hope things get better for you. Good job on the poem and good luck hope you have a blessed day
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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Stephen was never in jail until five years ago and he was 57 at that time. He served a year from 2019-2020 in state jail. Before then he never had so much as a traffic ticket, ever and that's very unusual and unheard of. He was arrested on August 31, 2023 and just suffice it to say, he was set up. He got out 160 days later on February 2, 2024 on a PR bond and on May 7, 2024 he walked to the probation office and they immediately arrested him and took him into custody. They said it was for a forfeiture of bond, which, I know beyond a shadow of a doubt it's bs. That's why it's hard on me bc it is all bc he was set up in August of last year. Please keep him in your prayers bc these cops around here do as they please, law wise or not;-(
God is going to take care of things, He's got us!
Thank you for your kind words and the five stars, which made my day!
Blessings to you and your family;-)
Comment from allison lammert
Your poem definitely conveyed the heart ache and frustration your feeling in the author notes. I can feel the desperation in this poem. I am sorry to hear about the reasoning for such a beautifully expressive piece.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
Your poem definitely conveyed the heart ache and frustration your feeling in the author notes. I can feel the desperation in this poem. I am sorry to hear about the reasoning for such a beautifully expressive piece.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2024
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That means I accomplished what I set out too. You "felt" my words and the emotions I was experiencing. If you hadn't "felt" them, then I am not a poet or writer.
Your sweet words along with those five stars are so amazing!
Blessings to you and your family;-)