Mermaid
Spot saves the day3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this loop poetry contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. The story was easy to follow. The flow made it enjoyable to read. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this loop poetry contest entry with us. I enjoyed reading. The story was easy to follow. The flow made it enjoyable to read. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 10-Sep-2024
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Thank you, Barbara.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
His tail was wagging, he looked pleased.
Pleased he'd saved the mermaid's pride.
Pride we shared, that pride was just.
Just in time we beat the tide.
I love the imagery and the graphics
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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His tail was wagging, he looked pleased.
Pleased he'd saved the mermaid's pride.
Pride we shared, that pride was just.
Just in time we beat the tide.
I love the imagery and the graphics
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Many thanks, Nicole.
Comment from jessizero
I'm not sure what this format is called. Loop poetry? At any rate, you did a great job and you told the story well in poem form. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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I'm not sure what this format is called. Loop poetry? At any rate, you did a great job and you told the story well in poem form. I also liked your rhymes. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2024
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Yeah. Loop poetry. So hard. Thanks for your positive comments.
