Eye for Love
Thinking about this today3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm confused. I thought a loop poem the last word in each line is the first word in the next line, even if you have additional stanzas. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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Thank you for sharing this contest entry with us. I'm confused. I thought a loop poem the last word in each line is the first word in the next line, even if you have additional stanzas. Maybe I'm wrong. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 10-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2024
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I may have done it wrong. Haha
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I may have done it wrong. Haha
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
a bright aura surrounds the chosen
chosen light that shows the soul
soul that is absent love
love does not always flow
if love could be seen
seen by everyone
everyone would surely know
know who suffers
Great imagery. All the best going forward!!
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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a bright aura surrounds the chosen
chosen light that shows the soul
soul that is absent love
love does not always flow
if love could be seen
seen by everyone
everyone would surely know
know who suffers
Great imagery. All the best going forward!!
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you!
Comment from patcelaw
This is a nicely written loop poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may your dreams come true. God bless you. Patricia .
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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This is a nicely written loop poem for the contest and I wish you the very best in the contest. May you have a wonderful day and may your dreams come true. God bless you. Patricia .
Comment Written 07-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much Patricia
