Stormy Seas
Short poem describing the fury of the sea9 total reviews
Comment from artisart4u
Yes, you did describe the fury of the sea.
You have the right amount of syllables for this poem.
The colors as well as the picture are beautiful and good luck with your poem.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Yes, you did describe the fury of the sea.
You have the right amount of syllables for this poem.
The colors as well as the picture are beautiful and good luck with your poem.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your praise of my short poem. Rod
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
I loved this poem! I also voted for you in this contest. I love the way it sounds when it's read. The picture is perfect too! I'm sad you didn't get more votes!
Great job with this!
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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I loved this poem! I also voted for you in this contest. I love the way it sounds when it's read. The picture is perfect too! I'm sad you didn't get more votes!
Great job with this!
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Jodi, for your praise of my poem and your vote. I am especially pleased you like the way it sounds when read aloud. Rod
Comment from Mark D. R.
Rod,
Take the shekels for your third highest score in this contest and run with them(-;
The relentless blows (un-reviews or votes) did not bother you either.
Do like your overall presentation.
Mark
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Rod,
Take the shekels for your third highest score in this contest and run with them(-;
The relentless blows (un-reviews or votes) did not bother you either.
Do like your overall presentation.
Mark
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2024
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Thanks, Mark. I really appreciate receiving this from a fellow competitor. Rod
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
Some great imagery here in your 25 syllable verse. I like the "hump backed waves" rather than whales, then "belt" and "body blows" give a powerful impression of the force and fury of the sea. Excellent! Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Some great imagery here in your 25 syllable verse. I like the "hump backed waves" rather than whales, then "belt" and "body blows" give a powerful impression of the force and fury of the sea. Excellent! Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Debbie, for this great review. So pleased you like the imagery.
Comment from Brett Brooks1
The writer's words assemble a turbulent shoreline relentless in its attack on nominal human sensibilities. Daring even in the human mind such an approach. Human history is littered with accounts of such daring spirits who have settled their very own selves in the balance between death and life. Stormy Seas evokes such a passion as it is repeated.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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The writer's words assemble a turbulent shoreline relentless in its attack on nominal human sensibilities. Daring even in the human mind such an approach. Human history is littered with accounts of such daring spirits who have settled their very own selves in the balance between death and life. Stormy Seas evokes such a passion as it is repeated.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you, Brett, for sharing my short poem. I really like your interpretation.
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
I absolutely love this and the graphic you used to go with it. The sea is mighty and so is it's roar. You did a good job of describing this. I wish you the best of luck going forward.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I absolutely love this and the graphic you used to go with it. The sea is mighty and so is it's roar. You did a good job of describing this. I wish you the best of luck going forward.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I am thrilled you love this short piece, Nicole, but can take no credit for the graphic chosen.
Comment from royowen
Oh yes, the heavy seas washing against the shore, van push the land back with the erosion if the waves doing much damage, a great entry in this 20 syllable poetry contest, good luck, my friend, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Oh yes, the heavy seas washing against the shore, van push the land back with the erosion if the waves doing much damage, a great entry in this 20 syllable poetry contest, good luck, my friend, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you very much, Roy, for sharing and praising this short poem.
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Most welcome
Comment from zaraduck6
A wonderful post! It was captivating and the ABCB rhyme scheme was amazing. You nailed the 25 syllable count! And the artwork you chose is stunning. Well done and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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A wonderful post! It was captivating and the ABCB rhyme scheme was amazing. You nailed the 25 syllable count! And the artwork you chose is stunning. Well done and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for your great response to my short poem. However, I can take no credit for that artwork which inspired the words.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I loved the humpback waves.
This poem is beautifully written and causes the reader to experience pleasant visual and audio pictures in her mind
Why is it that the crashing waves violently, abusing the rocks pleasant for us? The sound is so relaxing
I loved it. You can be proud
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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Hi. This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
I loved the humpback waves.
This poem is beautifully written and causes the reader to experience pleasant visual and audio pictures in her mind
Why is it that the crashing waves violently, abusing the rocks pleasant for us? The sound is so relaxing
I loved it. You can be proud
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2024
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I am pleased I could put you there, Pamusart, so you could see and hear the waves. Thank you very much for your kind praise.