The Saga of Procrastination
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Hey, good for you, getting to the "gym or die" is a great motto. It's not and easy ordeal, but if a person can keep going through all the soreness and pain, there are great rewards. Let me know how it goes. I need it too. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Hey, good for you, getting to the "gym or die" is a great motto. It's not and easy ordeal, but if a person can keep going through all the soreness and pain, there are great rewards. Let me know how it goes. I need it too. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Hi Ric, reporting back:) so it lasted 2 whole days, now I went back to my original procrastination plan:) dragging my feet and making nice excuses... oh, well, it's raining:)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
This is hilarious Iza and I just can't stop laughing at this magical and humorous post! I am glad that you can laugh at yourself in the gym when faced with all these classes that challenge us and sometimes harm us! Be careful and don't injure yourself. I wish I had a six left for you as this post deserves one, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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This is hilarious Iza and I just can't stop laughing at this magical and humorous post! I am glad that you can laugh at yourself in the gym when faced with all these classes that challenge us and sometimes harm us! Be careful and don't injure yourself. I wish I had a six left for you as this post deserves one, love Dolly x
Comment Written 12-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Hi Debbie, I hope you are doing well:)
and my gym adventure it lasted 2 whole days, now I went back to my original procrastination plan:) dragging my feet and making nice excuses... oh, well, it's raining:)
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You made me smile Iza, love Dolly x
Comment from Sally Law
You're such a riot! Yeah, I used to be an acrobat so there's always work to be done to get back there. I do pilates. It's great and I don't have to hit anybody. LOL! Whatever makes you happy and healthy, and gets the blood flowing, my friend.
You're not a racist, by the way. Geeze, what's the matter with folks today?
All my best,
Sal Xoxo
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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You're such a riot! Yeah, I used to be an acrobat so there's always work to be done to get back there. I do pilates. It's great and I don't have to hit anybody. LOL! Whatever makes you happy and healthy, and gets the blood flowing, my friend.
You're not a racist, by the way. Geeze, what's the matter with folks today?
All my best,
Sal Xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2024
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Hi Sally:) my gym adventure it lasted 2 whole days, now I went back to my original procrastination plan:) dragging my feet and making nice excuses... oh, well, it's raining:)
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I hit the gym, or the pool daily but only do one a day. Really doing it all at once probably not the best idea, but I could be wrong. LOL I had fun reading.
I jumped in the swimming pool and got myself some aqua.. fit, baby! (not sure why either .. are after aqua)
Isn't Savasana the Corpse Pose?
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I hit the gym, or the pool daily but only do one a day. Really doing it all at once probably not the best idea, but I could be wrong. LOL I had fun reading.
I jumped in the swimming pool and got myself some aqua.. fit, baby! (not sure why either .. are after aqua)
Isn't Savasana the Corpse Pose?
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from estory
The gym seems like a jungle of struggle, in your rant here. But what do they say, no pain no gain, right? Then you tell lit like it is about the reverse discrimmination in society today. Everybody is ready to hang you if you say the wrong thing. It is a complicated world we have to tip toe through today. estory
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The gym seems like a jungle of struggle, in your rant here. But what do they say, no pain no gain, right? Then you tell lit like it is about the reverse discrimmination in society today. Everybody is ready to hang you if you say the wrong thing. It is a complicated world we have to tip toe through today. estory
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Nicole Schmidt
First starting out on a fitness journey can be very tough. Your body wants to fight you but it it certainly does get easier. Good job here! All the best..
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First starting out on a fitness journey can be very tough. Your body wants to fight you but it it certainly does get easier. Good job here! All the best..
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Iza
A gym rat, eh? I used to be one. I would work out at the gym five hours a day five days a week. Now I am disabled enough that I really can't go to a gym. Even the pool takes me with its current and I don't have control over my body movements. So that can be kind of scary.
Your story is very humorous. I understand your definition of a racist. However, there are people of lots of colors and ethnic backgrounds who are racist. It is not just white people. I presume that the majority of racists are white people, but not all of them.
It is all about feeling superior. If you can downgrade people who don't agree with you or who look different talk different. You can feel that you're superior. That is racism.
Here it should be 'an' rather than 'a'. M (em). The sound starts with a vowel. Also become should be past tense became. Also did you mean better yet rather than better said?
"and I become a gangsta, or better said a MC Hammer fan. "
Here I think it should be get
"Somehow I managed to got through it, "
I believe you need the pronoun I in front of started
" where of course started waltzing"
Here try changing 'it a' to an
"what I call it a overkill:"
Here. Off rather than of
"Since I am out off school for two "
Here 'to me'
"so please explain me, "
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
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Hi, Iza
A gym rat, eh? I used to be one. I would work out at the gym five hours a day five days a week. Now I am disabled enough that I really can't go to a gym. Even the pool takes me with its current and I don't have control over my body movements. So that can be kind of scary.
Your story is very humorous. I understand your definition of a racist. However, there are people of lots of colors and ethnic backgrounds who are racist. It is not just white people. I presume that the majority of racists are white people, but not all of them.
It is all about feeling superior. If you can downgrade people who don't agree with you or who look different talk different. You can feel that you're superior. That is racism.
Here it should be 'an' rather than 'a'. M (em). The sound starts with a vowel. Also become should be past tense became. Also did you mean better yet rather than better said?
"and I become a gangsta, or better said a MC Hammer fan. "
Here I think it should be get
"Somehow I managed to got through it, "
I believe you need the pronoun I in front of started
" where of course started waltzing"
Here try changing 'it a' to an
"what I call it a overkill:"
Here. Off rather than of
"Since I am out off school for two "
Here 'to me'
"so please explain me, "
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from Begin Again
I give you a five for your humor and your effort at the gym. Never would I attempt it. But it's evident that it wore you out. Check your story over again. I've added a few oops! that I caught. One class at a time, Iza!!!
alowed (allowed)
criple (crippled)
pardon me me,
shapte (shape)
I am out off schools
recoverig (recovering)
Smiles, Carol
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I give you a five for your humor and your effort at the gym. Never would I attempt it. But it's evident that it wore you out. Check your story over again. I've added a few oops! that I caught. One class at a time, Iza!!!
alowed (allowed)
criple (crippled)
pardon me me,
shapte (shape)
I am out off schools
recoverig (recovering)
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
Comment from lyenochka
Oh my! What in the world has happened at your work place? I hope you get a new job soon. I'm so sorry that they labeled you a "racist" - they probably misunderstood you!
Thanks for sharing your humor in you "suicide" by exercise regiment. I never understood those teachers who make you work out hard and then exclaim, "No don't you feel so much more energy?" No, I'm tired!
oops it was a BARE class, (BARRE)
get out of comission, I highly recommend this class. (commission)
You can be criple in no time. (cripple)
Somehow I managed to got through it,
Yoga is the Shivashna (Savasana? The Corpse Pose?)
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Oh my! What in the world has happened at your work place? I hope you get a new job soon. I'm so sorry that they labeled you a "racist" - they probably misunderstood you!
Thanks for sharing your humor in you "suicide" by exercise regiment. I never understood those teachers who make you work out hard and then exclaim, "No don't you feel so much more energy?" No, I'm tired!
oops it was a BARE class, (BARRE)
get out of comission, I highly recommend this class. (commission)
You can be criple in no time. (cripple)
Somehow I managed to got through it,
Yoga is the Shivashna (Savasana? The Corpse Pose?)
Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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I am so grateful for your corrections, I wrote this between the snor snor and Oiler games, and also watching in paralel a horror movies. In conclusion multitasking is a killer:)
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You are amazing! I can only multitask two things at a time! 😂
Comment from zaraduck6
Ha ha! This was a fun little story to read! The character felt very distracted--in a good way! I love it. One quick thing: At the end of the first paragraph, do you mean to say "shape" instead of "shapte?" Anyways, a great story. Well done and keep it up!
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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Ha ha! This was a fun little story to read! The character felt very distracted--in a good way! I love it. One quick thing: At the end of the first paragraph, do you mean to say "shape" instead of "shapte?" Anyways, a great story. Well done and keep it up!
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Comment Written 10-Jun-2024
reply by the author on 10-Jun-2024
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Thank you so much for reading and sorry for my mistakes, I was half asleep when I wrote this story, I know lame excuse