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Grandpa, I Have to Pee

The Learning Tree. First time on a road trip with Grandpa.

19 total reviews 
Comment from T B Botts
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Hello Esther,
I loved the story, but I was saddened to see that you lost your granddaughter at such an untimely age. How very tragic. I'm so sorry for your loss. Thanks for sharing this.
Blessings,
Tom

 Comment Written 30-Jun-2024

Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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Such a heart-warming story. Brought a smile to my face until I read the author notes. I think your collection of short stories about Morgan is a wonderful idea and will be cherished by her brothers. thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 28-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Thanks Marilyn.
Comment from jessizero
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I am so very sorry for your tragic loss. Your story was so sweet and innocent, and it made me chuckle. Thank you for sharing this wonderful piece, and best wishes to you and your family.

 Comment Written 27-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Thanks Jessi
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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You made me smile with this one as this little girls answers the call of nature and learns to pee outside for the first time! Enjoying the outdoors sometimes means there is a little inconvenience, a fun post Esther, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jun-2024
    Thanks Dolly
Comment from GWHARGIS
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First, I'm so sorry for your loss. This was a fun and spirited short about nature calling and how she figured it all out. I told my grandson to go pee behind the sand dunes once when we were at the beach. Little did I know, he walked all the way to the edge of the road, over the sand dunes. He dropped his bathing suit and waved at the cars that passed by. Every day is a learning experience. Gretchen

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Too funny. Hubby was a logger so no stranger to woodsy bathrooms. Once, however, in AZ he had to poop. Cactus are not very concealing trees. All you can do is wave....
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Too funny. Hubby was a logger so no stranger to woodsy bathrooms. Once, however, in AZ he had to poop. Cactus are not very concealing trees. All you can do is wave....
Comment from Begin Again
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Grandpa played many roles in a little girl's life and I am sure there are memories galore to think back on. It's a cute story and thank you for sharing.
Smiles, Carol

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Fun stories to write.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Fun stories to write.
Comment from joann r romei
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This was a wonderful little story, and I am so sorry she passed away so young, so not right or fair, the idea of the stories is special and sentimental.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    I think Ben will enjoy them. He was 3 when Morgan died.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    I think Ben will enjoy them. He was 3 when Morgan died.
Comment from Liz O'Neill
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She might as well learn where the bathroom is at a young age: ""It is over there behind the tree." "Munchkin figures it out, and all is well." This makes me wonder how I learned, how my friend learned. How am I mother taught us. My brother had a tool he could bring with him on a picnic.

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Men have all the luck on that one.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    Men have all the luck on that one.
reply by Liz O'Neill on 27-Jun-2024
    so right. I was in a traffic jam and couldn't step onto the road because of the slant of the bank didn't really allow me to get out of the car to pee so I had to use a cup. No I guess they actually have some kind of a big cup for a woman to pee into i haven't thought of getting one
Comment from lyenochka
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I'm so sad to hear that little Morgan died at age 7! She's a smart girl to figure out that Grandpa meant to water the tree instead of finding a flushing toilet!

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    She was very precocious. Lots of Grandpa stories to tell.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    She was very precocious. Lots of Grandpa stories to tell.
Comment from royowen
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If one does a lot of driving one learns anywhere is ok, as long as it's private, physical desperation, the bladder's no that big, particularly in a little one, my mother came camping with us and she took fluid tablets, that was hairy, she wouldn't go behind a tree! Heh heh, well done, Esther, blessings Roy

 Comment Written 26-Jun-2024


reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    We took Morgan on road trips galore. Funny about your mom. At least she went camping! I grew up in Congo and we traveled a lot on the dirt roads to and from boarding school. Girls one side, boys the other.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2024
    We took Morgan on road trips galore. Funny about your mom. At least she went camping! I grew up in Congo and we traveled a lot on the dirt roads to and from boarding school. Girls one side, boys the other.
reply by royowen on 27-Jun-2024
    Such an experience
reply by royowen on 27-Jun-2024
    Such an experience