The Woman Who Was a Beach
Tourist meets a local girl14 total reviews
Comment from Ric Myworld
On the road for the last month and not going to make it home for another week or so, I haven't been able to keep up with reviewing all those I read regularly. But I'm certainly glad I found time to drop in and catch this one. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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On the road for the last month and not going to make it home for another week or so, I haven't been able to keep up with reviewing all those I read regularly. But I'm certainly glad I found time to drop in and catch this one. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thanks a lot for taking the time, Ric. Get home safe.
Comment from Wendy G
An excellent story, realistic and authentic, then dramatic and tense, and then - a surprising and even more dramatic twist with the reader left to connect the dots. Wish I had a six for you. Congratulations.
Wendy
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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An excellent story, realistic and authentic, then dramatic and tense, and then - a surprising and even more dramatic twist with the reader left to connect the dots. Wish I had a six for you. Congratulations.
Wendy
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the review, Wendy
Comment from nomi338
I was raised on the phrase, "What goes around, comes around." The grave you dig for your next victim could very well be the grave in which you spend eternity. Not to be forgotten is the warning that God does not like ugly. So, do not act like an ugly being, ok.
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I was raised on the phrase, "What goes around, comes around." The grave you dig for your next victim could very well be the grave in which you spend eternity. Not to be forgotten is the warning that God does not like ugly. So, do not act like an ugly being, ok.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Ha!! That backfired, didn't it? She was a serial killer just like him, only she kills men, and he was her next victim, she got in first! LOVE IT! That was excellent. You paced this so well, I had no idea that there was a twist, a double twist! Well done, that was brilliant. A virtual six. Sandra xx
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Ha!! That backfired, didn't it? She was a serial killer just like him, only she kills men, and he was her next victim, she got in first! LOVE IT! That was excellent. You paced this so well, I had no idea that there was a twist, a double twist! Well done, that was brilliant. A virtual six. Sandra xx
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Sandra, very glad you enjoyed the twists!
Comment from Dawn Munro
Well now, where have you been hiding? I will 'fan' you so you can't escape. Don't even bother trying. Just because I am fresh out of sixes this week doesn't mean I don't know outstanding writing when I read it.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Well now, where have you been hiding? I will 'fan' you so you can't escape. Don't even bother trying. Just because I am fresh out of sixes this week doesn't mean I don't know outstanding writing when I read it.
Comment Written 04-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Dawn!
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It was my pleasure. :)
Comment from Sharon Elwell
Wow! Twist upon twist! Nicely done. You create a solid, believable setting and gradually let us into the mind of your protagonist. I'd like to offer you some helpful advice, but there really isn't any to give - well, except maybe for the spelling "turist." Much to admire in this piece.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Wow! Twist upon twist! Nicely done. You create a solid, believable setting and gradually let us into the mind of your protagonist. I'd like to offer you some helpful advice, but there really isn't any to give - well, except maybe for the spelling "turist." Much to admire in this piece.
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you so, so much, Sharon.
Comment from Begin Again
What quick, concise and action packed entertainment in such a short space....And drawing the reader in so swiftly and dropping the bomb so to speak. A serial killer who met his match with another killer. Terrific! Well done!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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What quick, concise and action packed entertainment in such a short space....And drawing the reader in so swiftly and dropping the bomb so to speak. A serial killer who met his match with another killer. Terrific! Well done!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 03-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Carol!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
I enjoyed your story. You have a good imagination
It was very descriptive and well written. I was surprised at the ending. Great job.
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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I enjoyed your story. You have a good imagination
It was very descriptive and well written. I was surprised at the ending. Great job.
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Brenda
Comment from Natureschild
Hi Bruce,
The story's descriptions are rich and immersive, and drew me into the scene with sounds, smells, and tactile sensations. The characters, particularly Somsak and his sister, are depicted with enough detail to make them intriguing. Your story effectively builds tension, especially with the twist, creating a satisfying conclusion.
This peace leaves me with some questions; Why Phuket? What drives the characters' dark impulses?
Overall, you have crafted an engaging story which I enjoyed reading. - Terry
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Hi Bruce,
The story's descriptions are rich and immersive, and drew me into the scene with sounds, smells, and tactile sensations. The characters, particularly Somsak and his sister, are depicted with enough detail to make them intriguing. Your story effectively builds tension, especially with the twist, creating a satisfying conclusion.
This peace leaves me with some questions; Why Phuket? What drives the characters' dark impulses?
Overall, you have crafted an engaging story which I enjoyed reading. - Terry
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Terry, glad you enjoyed it.
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You're welcome.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
So, the serial killer got murdered by another serial killer. Interesting concept. I enjoyed reading and this is very well written. Thank you for sharing.
My dark impulses are lifted off of me, and all there is is solace. (maybe - are lifted from me)
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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So, the serial killer got murdered by another serial killer. Interesting concept. I enjoyed reading and this is very well written. Thank you for sharing.
My dark impulses are lifted off of me, and all there is is solace. (maybe - are lifted from me)
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Barbara
