Summer Treat
What going to the park in the summer time feels like.3 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Growing up I remember the ice cream man coming down our neighborhood street. I am wondering if they still do. I don't hear any music indicating they do. Hmm. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. It brought back a great memory. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Growing up I remember the ice cream man coming down our neighborhood street. I am wondering if they still do. I don't hear any music indicating they do. Hmm. Thank you for sharing this entry with us. It brought back a great memory. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for reading & your review! The ice cream man goes to the Park more than just going down streets. Glad you enjoyed my poem.
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Your poem captures the joy and excitement of enjoying ice cream on a hot day perfectly! I love how you share the anticipation when the Ice Cream Man arrives. The imagery of kids eagerly pulling their parents along for a treat. The mention of various fun flavors like SpongeBob, ladybugs, superheroes, and rocket pops adds a playful and colorful touch. It's a fun and enjoyable poem and you did a great job writing it!
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Your poem captures the joy and excitement of enjoying ice cream on a hot day perfectly! I love how you share the anticipation when the Ice Cream Man arrives. The imagery of kids eagerly pulling their parents along for a treat. The mention of various fun flavors like SpongeBob, ladybugs, superheroes, and rocket pops adds a playful and colorful touch. It's a fun and enjoyable poem and you did a great job writing it!
Comment Written 02-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review, I really appreciate you taking the time to read my poem & write me a review. Maybe next poem I can add that. I only had so many lines I could write.
Thanks!
Comment from patcelaw
This is just not fair. You made me hungry for ice cream and I don't need any more ice cream today. I wish you the very best with the contest and I also wish you a very good week. God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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This is just not fair. You made me hungry for ice cream and I don't need any more ice cream today. I wish you the very best with the contest and I also wish you a very good week. God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 01-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your review and Thank you for reading my poem!
Your welcome enjoy your ice cream, today, tomorrow or All summer!