The Right Place
For those times when the world can get to you38 total reviews
Comment from godlucifer
evil out of the way. evil no boundary. they say good over evil. in thoughts we hold no evil but in boundary we hold no good. your poem was a delighted read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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evil out of the way. evil no boundary. they say good over evil. in thoughts we hold no evil but in boundary we hold no good. your poem was a delighted read. thanks for the read.
truly
godlucifer
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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You are so very kind. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those moments. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Pearl Edwards
I think we all feel like this at times, for me it's my own feelings of inadequacy that take me low. You've shown that we all have ups and downs and our way to cope is individual. Lovely presentation Debi,
Cheers
Valda
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I think we all feel like this at times, for me it's my own feelings of inadequacy that take me low. You've shown that we all have ups and downs and our way to cope is individual. Lovely presentation Debi,
Cheers
Valda
Comment Written 06-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hi Valda, you are so very kind. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those momen appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
Comment from LJbutterfly
Last week a friend of mine sent me an email article about 'worry.' It said, "Turn your inner monologue into open dialogue with God." In other words, turn worry into worship.
As your poem states, we get caught up in sad and stressful thoughts, based on external experiences, forgetting we don't have to stay there. Our thoughts CAN make us sink. Thanks for sharing this inspiration.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Last week a friend of mine sent me an email article about 'worry.' It said, "Turn your inner monologue into open dialogue with God." In other words, turn worry into worship.
As your poem states, we get caught up in sad and stressful thoughts, based on external experiences, forgetting we don't have to stay there. Our thoughts CAN make us sink. Thanks for sharing this inspiration.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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LOL, wonderful advice and actually that is what I did, but after I got the inspiration for a poem for it. (Smile)
First I was sad, but I know that is human nature. So after I wrote the poem, it helped me to feel closer to God and that is how I came up with the ending. I think God led me to the ending of the poem. Also it was after a dr appt so I needed to go thru some of it I guess.
Thanks for the kind comments, my sweet friend. Love, Debi
Comment from Monica Chaddick
Another absolutely beautiful piece of poetry. I think that we all have that place inside of us. You described it perfectly. Oh, also, that art that you selected is absolutely amazing!
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Another absolutely beautiful piece of poetry. I think that we all have that place inside of us. You described it perfectly. Oh, also, that art that you selected is absolutely amazing!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Hi Monika, what a very kind review and comments, my dear friend. I appreciate the awesome words, sweet review and the glorious six stars. Thanks again, so very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Erika Whittle
I love your presentation. The colors on the black background are beautiful. Your poem is lovely. I have a few grammatical suggestions that you can feel free to ignore.
3 stanza: Those places that...perhaps change that to where
Stanza 4: A place that cares and trustworthy
Where you stay well and treated fair
Perhaps,
A place that cares, is trustworthy
Where you stay well, are treated fair
These are just small things. I really did enjoy reading it
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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I love your presentation. The colors on the black background are beautiful. Your poem is lovely. I have a few grammatical suggestions that you can feel free to ignore.
3 stanza: Those places that...perhaps change that to where
Stanza 4: A place that cares and trustworthy
Where you stay well and treated fair
Perhaps,
A place that cares, is trustworthy
Where you stay well, are treated fair
These are just small things. I really did enjoy reading it
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much, Erika. Yeah, I did think of that too and there was a reason I wrote it that way, but can't think of what it was now. LOL... but I always appreciate great feedback so thanks so much. And also for the very kind comments and review. You are very sweet. Love, Debi
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello, Debi,
The sentiments that you express in your poetic offering are heartfelt and will resonate with many.
I note that you employ different pronouns throughout your offering.
I would consider employing first person, "I" and "my" throughout rather than "our" or "you" or "we" as you are speaking for yourself with the hopes that the reader will relate to your message.
Thank you for sharing,
diane
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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Hello, Debi,
The sentiments that you express in your poetic offering are heartfelt and will resonate with many.
I note that you employ different pronouns throughout your offering.
I would consider employing first person, "I" and "my" throughout rather than "our" or "you" or "we" as you are speaking for yourself with the hopes that the reader will relate to your message.
Thank you for sharing,
diane
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2024
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You are absolutely right, Diane. I know better too, so I thank you for pointing that out. I appreciate it very much. Thanks for your other very kind comments too. Debi
Comment from pome lover
Heavens, Deb, that sounds like some people haven't been or aren't now nice to you. If so, I can't imagine why that would be, as you are nothing but nice and positive about everything and everybody.
Well, just keep being your cute, happy, smiling self, and here you go again (sigh) wracking up another All Time Best :) My woid, girl, don't you get tired of this? Kidding, as I'm sure you know.
Congratulations once again!
K
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Heavens, Deb, that sounds like some people haven't been or aren't now nice to you. If so, I can't imagine why that would be, as you are nothing but nice and positive about everything and everybody.
Well, just keep being your cute, happy, smiling self, and here you go again (sigh) wracking up another All Time Best :) My woid, girl, don't you get tired of this? Kidding, as I'm sure you know.
Congratulations once again!
K
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hey Sweetie, I have missed you. I have to go see if you have been writing too. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those moments. Thanks for the six stars for this one as I was having one of those days.
I appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-Your wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening verses show the
place where we encounter unpleasant thoughts.
-You make a good point about heartache.
-A good transition to a better place.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing it and have a great day.
-Hope you had a good Fourth, as well.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-Your wrote a good poem with a good topic.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-Very good opening verses show the
place where we encounter unpleasant thoughts.
-You make a good point about heartache.
-A good transition to a better place.
-A very good concluding verse.
-Thanks for sharing it and have a great day.
-Hope you had a good Fourth, as well.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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As always, Pam, you are so very kind. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those moments. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
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You are very welcome, Debi, and I appreciate your friendship very much, too. Have a great day and weekend, too.
Comment from Jacob1395
I think it is fascinating how our mind works and how sometimes it can take us into some dark places. This was a well written, insightful piece of writing Debi, and I thought it was an excellent read.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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I think it is fascinating how our mind works and how sometimes it can take us into some dark places. This was a well written, insightful piece of writing Debi, and I thought it was an excellent read.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Hi Jacob, you are so very kind. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those moments. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
****** six virtual stars cause I don't have six for you. Classic writing, so true. We won't find peace and be pain free, until it's Jesus we see. Sometimes we fall and can't get up, we feel it's not worth it. Those times are hard until He stretches out His hand of grace. K xx
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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****** six virtual stars cause I don't have six for you. Classic writing, so true. We won't find peace and be pain free, until it's Jesus we see. Sometimes we fall and can't get up, we feel it's not worth it. Those times are hard until He stretches out His hand of grace. K xx
Comment Written 05-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2024
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Awe, thank you, Kace. And you are so very kind. I appreciate your very thoughtful words and it helps to know that others do go through those moments. I appreciate your kindness and your friendship very much. Love, Debi
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I wuv you too :-) XX and Benny sends a big, sloppy kiss. Some days are diamonds, some days are stones. Yippee, today is a diamond. You?