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The Bipolar Mania

A poem about bipolar mania

35 total reviews 
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
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Pamusart, this is just wonderful! So expressive and clear-voiced even in the midst of an overwhelming struggle! I don't have any more sixes, but this deserves one! Maddy

 Comment Written 10-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from gansach
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Thank you for sharing your feelings in this biographical poem. It must be very difficult to deal with this roller coaster type of life. And sometimes it's even harder to speak honestly and openly about it. I applaud your courage. Your poem expresses the feelings you have and what it's like, good rhyme and meter, very descriptive words. Well done!

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you, hamachi for your wonderful comments and a great review
Comment from teafor2
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Thanks for your candid reflection and introspection on this difficult disease...Even as we readers review your poetic personal battle treastise,
many are facing most of, if not all of the gut-wrenching feelings of hope-
lessness/helplessness you have addressed in intimate details...Thanks for
being bold and brave enough to come forward and your story with Fanstory. Take care and may God bless you...

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
reply by teafor2 on 09-Jul-2024
    You are welcome.
reply by teafor2 on 11-Jul-2024
    You are welcome.
Comment from jenintorre
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Well this poem is definitely a learning curb for me. I knew nothing about bipolar. I do hope your mania is soon through. A very thought provoking poem with excellent artwork. Best wishes Jen.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from Samantha Wymer
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I love that you wrote this poem. I respect you for it. There are a lot of people suffering from this that needs support and understanding. Thank you. Your poem is written excellent. I give you a 6 star. You deserve it for being awesome in everything you do.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
    Thank you so much for your wonderful comments and the sixth star. I really appreciate both and you made my day.
Comment from lyenochka
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Thanks for taking us into the mind of one with bipolar. You're not alone as several of our fellow writers here suffer from it and you all are so talented and intelligent. Your awareness shows that you know how to deal with it.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from nomi338
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While I, in 81 years of life have managed to avoid this awful disease, I mourn for you. I cannot even begin to understand what you must be going through. Just being told about it can never match the actual experience. I pray that you may through God's mercy can manage to survive this malady somehow.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from LJbutterfly
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In your poem, you provide a clear explanation of what you experience as a person dealing with a Bipolar disorder. People without the disorder struggle with recurring and worrying thoughts. It must be far more difficult when your mind cannot quieten down. I admire your willingness to share and educate your readers. I also encourage you in your creative boldness to continue writing.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from jessizero
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I think you did a good job describing the mania part of bipolar disorder. I can relate because I have a similar diagnosis. I admire your rhymes, as well. Thank you so much for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Much appreciation for sharing with readers your plight with bipolar mania.
I found your offering not only informative but very courageous.
I worked with a lady who was bi-polar, and her challenges and suffering were excruciating to behold and comprehend.

Regarding grandure, I believe you want to use "grandeur."

Thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you for your wonderful review
    and excellent stars