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Teri's Purr~fect Birthday

Merry~go~Rhyme for Teri 7

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Comment from Pearl Edwards
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I remember reading some of Terri's posts about Greyson. This was another lovely birthday tribute, and a nice way for all of us to get to know her better. Well done, again, Debi,
cheers,
valda

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Valda, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from dragonpoet
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Hi Debi
This is a nice poem that shows what a full life Teri has had and still has.
Congrats on the coming grandchild. I hope the prayers help her MS stay in check. Maybe she should move into a farm with all those animals.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful week
Joan

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Joan, I kinda think they do live on a farm. They live in Tennessee and since she lost count on cats and plus takes care of her son's animals too, I wonder if they don't all live on the same farm.
    My husband and I have a hundred acre farm and our son lives next door with a creek and a bridge that separates us. Now, we don't have animals but if they have a situation where they live that close then I can see why they would take care of the animals when they were gone.
    Isn't that cute that she has a grand chicken and grand dog? Haha
    Leave it up to Teri to add that in.

    Thanks for the awesome review and sweet comments, my dear friend.
    Love, Debi
reply by dragonpoet on 10-Jul-2024
    A farm seems like a good guess.
    You are most kindly welcome for the review, Debi,
    Joan
Comment from Brenda Strauser
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Hi Debi, I really like this poem to Teri. It is very descriptive of every part of her life. Well written. I like the videos, especially Carrie Underwood's How Great Thou Art. Great job. Love, Brenda

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Brenda, what a sweet and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
reply by Brenda Strauser on 10-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much Debi, I'm going to check it out.
Comment from Father Flaps
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Hi Debi,
I'm sure that Teri will appreciate your birthday poem. It's not easy getting so much pertinent information into a rhyming poem. Many times, our local historian (David Goss) asks me to write him a poem about a ghost in the area. He hosts ghost walks, mainly for summer tourists to Saint John, and reads one or two of my poems along the way. Sometimes he'll even dress up for it!
I'm familiar with Teri7, as she's been a member since October of 2006, a Christian and cat keeper!
My favorite lines,
"This tribute's for a woman who we truly do adore
And even though we love her, we know Jesus loves her more"
and,
"Her family and husband, Tom,
They feel her love, her peace, her calm."
and,
"So Teri, Happy Birthday, may your day have no regrets
And hope you will have many more and nobody forgets"

I especially liked the part about her grand-chicken, Polly, and her grand-dog, Gus!

Nicely penned! "HaPpY BiRtHdAy, TeRi!!!"
Hugs,
Kimbob

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Kimbob, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Sanku
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Thank you very much for giving us so much of information about terry It is so endearing that she loves to take care of cats and dogs please pass on my wishes to her ..Thank you very much for he songs too especially the one by Carrie Underwood..

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi there Santha, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Pam (respa)
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-Very nice artwork and presentation, Debi.
-A well written tribute for Teri's birthday.
-Effective imagery and rhyme.
-I like how you begin the poem,
but I am sorry for the loss of her sister.
-You do a good job with aspects of her
family that she cares deeply about.
-I like your reference to her 'grand chicken!"
-I'm sure she enjoys Greyson's company.
-Hope you have a very Happy Birthday, Teri.
I enjoyed reading the tribute for you.
-Great job, Debi!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Pam, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
reply by Pam (respa) on 10-Jul-2024
    You are very welcome, Debi, and thanks for sharing everything.
Comment from Jacob1395
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Another excellent birthday poem Debi and great to find out about Teri, a writer who's work I'm not yet familiar on this site, but I'll definitely be checking Teri's work out. I hope she had a great birthday.

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Awe thanks so very much, Jacob. I appreciate such kind comments for Teri's poem.
    If you would like to add a few notes for your poem for this coming weekend, then maybe by Friday would be good. If you want to pm me you can or my email is debipm@icloud.com. I can take some of it out of the profile too but I know a lot of people want to know if there is a special someone in your life. LOL. At least a little about your family??
    Thanks so much, Jacob. You are the best. Love, Debi
Comment from Aussie
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For our special Teri. Our arms are around you, tightly bound with human love for you. Jesus rocks you gently in His everlasting Arms. Another birthday for our special Teri, written with love by our special sister in Christ, Debi. Thanks for writing this for Teri, you made my day I can only imagine how much you made Teri's day. K xx

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Kace, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.
    Thanks so much for the lovely stars again too my dear.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Mintybee
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Happy birthday, Teri! Clearly God and family are the top priorities here, which is wonderful. I'm sure Teri really appreciates your birthday merry-go-rhyme poem.
Mintybee

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Mintybee, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
Comment from Dr. Nad
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This is a wonderful piece to celebrate another birthday with one more FanStory favorite. You have helped us to not only see, but to celebrate some of the many accomplishments of Teri 7. You have enlightened us concerning some of the challenges that she has had to go through. She has, not only survived, but thrived largely due to her commitment to family and her heavenly father. These stories are truly inspirational. Thank you so very much.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Hi Dan, what a kind and caring review and words for our Teri and her poem. Thank you so very much, my awesome friend. And also for the lovely extra stars.

    A lot of people have been asking about the Merry~go~Rhyme and
    I don't know if you ever saw the birth of the Merry~go~Rhyme that tells how it started with Sally's Circus poems and I had to venture out. It is a lot of fun and explains how they got started. Love, Debi

    Here is a link to it if you are interested.

    https://www.fanstory.com/displaystory.jsp?hd=1&id=1094053&userid=938546&tf=0
reply by Dr. Nad on 10-Jul-2024
    And for the review. As far as learning how to go around in circles and create a poem, i'll think about that. But thanks for everything you do.