On a summer's Day
Him on the water her on the sand3 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
This one-liner is a great example of "Antanaclasis" with the ocean wave and the girlfriend's wave. Hope it was a wave of encouragement and hello and not goodbye!
Best wishes in the contest!
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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This one-liner is a great example of "Antanaclasis" with the ocean wave and the girlfriend's wave. Hope it was a wave of encouragement and hello and not goodbye!
Best wishes in the contest!
Comment Written 08-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your comments and the six stars. Yes,let's hope it was just a friendly wave. All the best
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
Nicely done! You share a moment filled with both physical and emotional waves. haha. There's a sense of anticipation and joy in the air, captured in your brief but descriptive sentence.
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Nicely done! You share a moment filled with both physical and emotional waves. haha. There's a sense of anticipation and joy in the air, captured in your brief but descriptive sentence.
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for your comments and on my sentence and the lovely stars
Comment from Bill Schott
This antanaclasis sentence, On a Summer's Day, calls for some clapping rather than a wave to accept and denote this presentation as a good example. Surf's up!
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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This antanaclasis sentence, On a Summer's Day, calls for some clapping rather than a wave to accept and denote this presentation as a good example. Surf's up!
Comment Written 07-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
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Thanks for your lovely stars, I enjoyed creating this sentence. Sorry can't find two meaning for clapping so I stick with Wave