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Nostrildamus

a 5-7-5

7 total reviews 
Comment from A.Z. Schott
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This is a fun poem. I love your whimsical creativity. Your play on words are a fun escape. This is something you might see in a kid's book. It's cartoonish in its humor that makes it memorable. Thanks for sharing!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you, AZ
Comment from Nicki.B
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This is so funny. Very cleverly put together, I love that humour, short snappy and such a hilarious image. Well done to you and best of luck in the competition!

 Comment Written 09-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 09-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Nicki
Comment from tempeste
Exceptional
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Ciao poet, you now have 4 votes.

This would have a great entry even for the witty contest.

It made me laugh tears , love the :

As far as anyone NOSE instead of KNOWS.

Brilliant word play also in the title !




 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much, T.
Comment from jessizero
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I got a laugh out of this one! The poem was funny, especially when paired with the picture. You got the syllable count right for the contest, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Thank you, Jessizero
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Exceptional
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Warped as per usual. I love this stuff. Where does this stuff come from? I picture some kind of Rube Goldberg device with odd witticisms bursting out of a too small opening inside your brain.:-)

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    He knew you would say that.
reply by Karen Cherry Threadgill on 08-Jul-2024
    Well, Bill, and yes, I knew it was you or your somewhat skewed twin. You have a unique voice. They always know! :-)
Comment from Colorado Owl
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Very funny! Your poem is delightful and the picture is hilarious. Best of luck to you in the 5-7-5 contest. Who "nose" ? You may win by a "nose"!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 08-Jul-2024
    Hope I get picked.
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 writing prompt. This 5-7-5 really breathed new life into the Haiku format. It couldn't have been easy not to booger up the prompt. I smell a victory!

 Comment Written 07-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 07-Jul-2024
    Hope I don't blow it.
reply by Marilyn Hamilton on 07-Jul-2024
    Lol