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Comment from BOO ghost
Yeah, I thought Japanese syllables were shorter. After, I made a six-month stint to Japan. This presentation... Is beyond describing it! Beautiful as a Monarch butterfly after metamorphosis. Mesmerizing. This is eye-poping! I done forgot how to do the fancy stuff. Nice bouquet of words too! You outdone yourself with this masterpiece. Breathtaking. A dangling modifier. I can only give a virtual six. A lot of love went into this! BOO appreciates the time this gem took! BOO!
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Yeah, I thought Japanese syllables were shorter. After, I made a six-month stint to Japan. This presentation... Is beyond describing it! Beautiful as a Monarch butterfly after metamorphosis. Mesmerizing. This is eye-poping! I done forgot how to do the fancy stuff. Nice bouquet of words too! You outdone yourself with this masterpiece. Breathtaking. A dangling modifier. I can only give a virtual six. A lot of love went into this! BOO appreciates the time this gem took! BOO!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review my poem. Have a wonderful weekend.
Gypsy
Comment from RJ Heritage
She desires to be everything to her lover, which to me is great, but dreamy. But we are parts of what we desire and many times it's expressed in our dreams. I really enjoyed this poem, it touches so many deep feelings tga t are hidden beneath our skins. Nice one.
RJ
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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She desires to be everything to her lover, which to me is great, but dreamy. But we are parts of what we desire and many times it's expressed in our dreams. I really enjoyed this poem, it touches so many deep feelings tga t are hidden beneath our skins. Nice one.
RJ
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your excellent review and kind words.
Gypsy
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You're welcome
Comment from Rachelle Allen
This is absolutely beautiful. What a giving, thoughtful, love-filled expression this is, encouraging someone to to just "give in" to the love of another soul. This felt peaceful and lovely. Plus it was visually gorgeous, too. xoxo
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is absolutely beautiful. What a giving, thoughtful, love-filled expression this is, encouraging someone to to just "give in" to the love of another soul. This felt peaceful and lovely. Plus it was visually gorgeous, too. xoxo
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you, Rachelle. I hope you are well. It's always good to hear from you.
Gypsy hugs
Comment from lyenochka
You describe such lovely sensations throughout the poem. You always cover the lesser senses of taste and smell along with the hearing, seeing, and touch!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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You describe such lovely sensations throughout the poem. You always cover the lesser senses of taste and smell along with the hearing, seeing, and touch!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, big sister. I hope you are well.
❤️ love,
Marival
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Hope you are doing well, too! 💞💖
Comment from Esther Brown
That was so beautiful it was haunting. And yes, it flows and conveys strong feeling of joy and awe as you intended. The pictures, as always, compliment your poetry. Esther
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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That was so beautiful it was haunting. And yes, it flows and conveys strong feeling of joy and awe as you intended. The pictures, as always, compliment your poetry. Esther
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much. I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from Ricky1024
I think this is one of your better works Gypsy rich in Theme and.
The art work works well with the season changes.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I think this is one of your better works Gypsy rich in Theme and.
The art work works well with the season changes.
Thanks for sharing this and have a Blessed day.
Doctor Ricky
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional six stars review and kind words, Dr Ricky
Gypsy
Comment from shelley kaye
you could put the 3rd stanza right aligned lol --
love the pics and colours
the imagery within the words was great
and i could feel, see, hear - everything -
nice smooth, comforting flow -
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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you could put the 3rd stanza right aligned lol --
love the pics and colours
the imagery within the words was great
and i could feel, see, hear - everything -
nice smooth, comforting flow -
thank you for sharing
shelley :)
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review and kind words,
Gypsy
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is such a delightful free verse about summer and light after the rain and darkness of our current 'summer' in the UK:( Your verse is infused with those forces of nature always striving for the light. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is such a delightful free verse about summer and light after the rain and darkness of our current 'summer' in the UK:( Your verse is infused with those forces of nature always striving for the light. Thanks for sharing, Gypsy. Debbie
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much for your exceptional five stars review and kind words, Debbie... I understand your UK phrase 😊 it's almost the same as American English.
Gypsy
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I was getting ready to do some editing and I saw you posted and couldn't wait to read, being my favorite poet and all. You did not disappoint me. The poem and the presentation are perfect. Thank you.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I was getting ready to do some editing and I saw you posted and couldn't wait to read, being my favorite poet and all. You did not disappoint me. The poem and the presentation are perfect. Thank you.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, Barbara. Have a wonderful day 😊
Gypsy hugs
