Etchings
moonlight beauty10 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi Gail,
This is a good mix of words and artwork. Your words provide strong images of a serene nighttime scene. I like the metaphor and alliteration used.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Hi Gail,
This is a good mix of words and artwork. Your words provide strong images of a serene nighttime scene. I like the metaphor and alliteration used.
Congrats on placing second in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Have a wonderful weekend.
Joan
Comment Written 21-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2024
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Thanks so much, Joan! Happy Fall Equinox to you!
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Don't mention it, Gail.
Joan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
LOL I enjoyed the ending of this contest entry. It was fun to read. The flow was very good. I'm sure because of the good rhyming scheme. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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LOL I enjoyed the ending of this contest entry. It was fun to read. The flow was very good. I'm sure because of the good rhyming scheme. Thank you for sharing and good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2024
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2024
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Thank you very much!
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
I love the look of your poem's presentation with the black and white colors and the beautiful artwork. You have such lovely descriptions in your poem. This makes a nice entry for the Rhyming poem contest. Good luck.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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I love the look of your poem's presentation with the black and white colors and the beautiful artwork. You have such lovely descriptions in your poem. This makes a nice entry for the Rhyming poem contest. Good luck.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thank you so very much!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
Oh I love your writing! Beautiful images touched my thoughts. It has perfect rhyme, and poems about nature can be so calming and rich. Great job with this!
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Oh I love your writing! Beautiful images touched my thoughts. It has perfect rhyme, and poems about nature can be so calming and rich. Great job with this!
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much--I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from lyenochka
This is delightful and gives us the sense of magic of the poet's imagination. I liked how the poem is woven together with so many present active participles which give it that extra sense of something happening now and continuously.
I searched for One Light Beside the Moon in Amazon Kindle Store but could not find it.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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This is delightful and gives us the sense of magic of the poet's imagination. I liked how the poem is woven together with so many present active participles which give it that extra sense of something happening now and continuously.
I searched for One Light Beside the Moon in Amazon Kindle Store but could not find it.
Comment Written 12-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2024
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Thanks so much for your review. You won't find my book anywhere~it was a limited run of a couple hundred copies. It was the prize in the 1999 International Poet's Society Convention and Competition in Washington, DC. I was a runner up to the Grand Prize that year with a prize of $100 & a book contract and One Light Beside the Moon was the book I had published. I think I might still have a few copies packed away somewhere but it's not for sale anywhere. I appreciate your comments. Thanks again!
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Wow, congratulations on the win! I hope if the publisher permits, that you will republish it on Amazon using their KDP. I had some issues with their formatting but other than that, it's a very inexpensive way to self-publish and get to market quickly.
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Thanks for the info. I'll look into it.
Comment from Lindsey Russell
I love this poem. The images invoked by this work are beautiful! It's a work of art. Congratulations on it. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!!!
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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I love this poem. The images invoked by this work are beautiful! It's a work of art. Congratulations on it. Thanks for sharing and happy writing!!!
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review.
Comment from Esther Brown
That was beautifully done. Magic. I could feel it. Thank you for your elegant poetry. I could almost see the faeries dancing on the moonlight beams. Made me smile. Esther
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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That was beautifully done. Magic. I could feel it. Thank you for your elegant poetry. I could almost see the faeries dancing on the moonlight beams. Made me smile. Esther
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A quiet peaceful and undisturbed night under the moonlight here and I enjoyed the ambiance and magic of the moon twinkling through the branches here, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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A quiet peaceful and undisturbed night under the moonlight here and I enjoyed the ambiance and magic of the moon twinkling through the branches here, love Dolly x
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you very much, I appreciate it.
Comment from royowen
A beautifully written post my friend, in perfect rhythm, which I'm told is difficult to do, the meter is not only smooth and pleasant to read, but it's articulate and well rhymed, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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A beautifully written post my friend, in perfect rhythm, which I'm told is difficult to do, the meter is not only smooth and pleasant to read, but it's articulate and well rhymed, great entry, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much for your kind review, much appreciated.
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Most welcome
Comment from patcelaw
This is very nicely written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you the best with your book that you have a good evening and may God bless. Patricia.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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This is very nicely written and I enjoyed very much listening to it. I wish you the very best with all of your writing and I especially wish you the best with your book that you have a good evening and may God bless. Patricia.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much, Patricia. I hope you have a lovely weekend. Best wishes!
