Just One More
We wish we had one more minute, hour with loved ones.5 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
We are not promised tomorrow or even the next hour. We need to make sure we let the people in our lives know how much we love them. Thank you for sharing this reminder with us as a contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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We are not promised tomorrow or even the next hour. We need to make sure we let the people in our lives know how much we love them. Thank you for sharing this reminder with us as a contest entry. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
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You are welcome. Thank you.
Comment from Paul McFarland
This is a very nice effort, Darla. You almost squeezed six stars out of me. You picked a great subject. I think this poem would be excellent if you added one more stanza that would really grab the reader.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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This is a very nice effort, Darla. You almost squeezed six stars out of me. You picked a great subject. I think this poem would be excellent if you added one more stanza that would really grab the reader.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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The poem already is excellent.
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I added another stanza.
Comment from Colorado Owl
We should all have this message on our bathroom mirror to look at each morning, reminding us of what's important. Thank you for writing this. We need to treasure every moment. Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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We should all have this message on our bathroom mirror to look at each morning, reminding us of what's important. Thank you for writing this. We need to treasure every moment. Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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You are welcome. Thank you
Comment from tempeste
Ciao Pookietoo!
This topic touches a nerve.
My mother passed away suddenly , we had argued over something futile 4 days prior.
We were still not speaking to each other when she died.
I wish I could go back and make up, tell her I loved her.
Dying without being able to say those last precious words like : I love you or I'm sorry is horrible for both the deceased and for those left behind.
We should always try to be in harmony with everyone.
Never let an argument linger and say " I love you" when we leave the house.
Life is fragile and so unpredictable.
PS: you have a typo in the first stanza ; the word hour is missing the H
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Ciao Pookietoo!
This topic touches a nerve.
My mother passed away suddenly , we had argued over something futile 4 days prior.
We were still not speaking to each other when she died.
I wish I could go back and make up, tell her I loved her.
Dying without being able to say those last precious words like : I love you or I'm sorry is horrible for both the deceased and for those left behind.
We should always try to be in harmony with everyone.
Never let an argument linger and say " I love you" when we leave the house.
Life is fragile and so unpredictable.
PS: you have a typo in the first stanza ; the word hour is missing the H
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thanks for the six stars! I thought I fixed the typo!
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I checked , the H is there now! 😐
I hope you have a sunny ☀️ weekend.
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Yes working on crocheting an afghan. Yes it is there. If you would like, you can read the other poem I posted
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
In the second line HOUR is missing it's H. Other than that you have a good, heartfelt piece of poetry. It is written well and with true feeling. I have read poems here that look pretty and competent, but they are missing what makes us feel their work. I certainly felt your emotions I share them too. Good work. Karen
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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In the second line HOUR is missing it's H. Other than that you have a good, heartfelt piece of poetry. It is written well and with true feeling. I have read poems here that look pretty and competent, but they are missing what makes us feel their work. I certainly felt your emotions I share them too. Good work. Karen
Comment Written 13-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 13-Jul-2024
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Thanks, Karen!!!
