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trumpian Nonet

assasination in a nonet form

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

A lot of people would've liked it if the assassins bullet its found their mark

President Kennedy was assassinated by the CIA because he was too dangerous for our country

He was about to start a nuclear war with Russia using Cuba as the vehicle. Russia had put nuclear weapons inside. Cuba pointed at our mainland.

So, the CIA hired Lee Harvey Oswald to do the job

Then, Jack Ruby killed Oswald. Jack Ruby was part of the mob and he was dying of cancer or something like that

They did not want Oswald to be talking to anyway, which is why he had to be killed

Trump may be in a similar predicament He's also a danger to the country evidence by his sharing classified documents with whoever wanted to look at them.

When they talk about those documents describing assets, they're talking about spies who can be killed if people find out who they are

Plus, he could jeopardize national security. He could even start a nuclear war.

I liked reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    thanks a lot
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
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The progression of thoughts in your poem works so well. You capture the craziness of such a terrible event. The structure worked perfectly in doing so. I liked it until the final three words.

 Comment Written 15-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 16-Jul-2024
    thanks a lot