Trump's Assassination 5-7-5
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Comment from F. William Lester
The first is a sad commentary on our current state of our political system and the last is a truth we can't avoid. Isn't there anyone in the generations that came after us who are capable of leading? If this is all we have, what do we do when they're gone? Sad. I'm still hopeful. Well done. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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The first is a sad commentary on our current state of our political system and the last is a truth we can't avoid. Isn't there anyone in the generations that came after us who are capable of leading? If this is all we have, what do we do when they're gone? Sad. I'm still hopeful. Well done. Good luck in the contest and stay well.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
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thanks as always
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You're welcome.
Comment from Esther Brown
Frankly agree with you but didn't respond to the poem. Just was getting ready to read entries to your contest on futuristic city climate change and realized CIty needs to be fixed. Think you need to know. Esther (Not personal, I have not voted or made any entry, just note things...)
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Frankly agree with you but didn't respond to the poem. Just was getting ready to read entries to your contest on futuristic city climate change and realized CIty needs to be fixed. Think you need to know. Esther (Not personal, I have not voted or made any entry, just note things...)
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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thanks a lot
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Don trump is insane
If he even has a brain
Noone drives the train
Dump the trump is heard
As he blubbers up a word
He is so absurd
What if he woke up one day
And he clothes fastened the other way
would he have any friends
The way he pretends
I wonder if he's really gay?
I felt the need to write this stuff you inspired me.
Karen
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Don trump is insane
If he even has a brain
Noone drives the train
Dump the trump is heard
As he blubbers up a word
He is so absurd
What if he woke up one day
And he clothes fastened the other way
would he have any friends
The way he pretends
I wonder if he's really gay?
I felt the need to write this stuff you inspired me.
Karen
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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thanks I like it
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:-)
Comment from bonespur
This is such a controversial subject to tap into. Your feelings definitely came through in your wording. I'm not for positive but using assassination means he was killed you probably should have used assassination attempt. To be gramatically, and politically correct.
Good job though and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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This is such a controversial subject to tap into. Your feelings definitely came through in your wording. I'm not for positive but using assassination means he was killed you probably should have used assassination attempt. To be gramatically, and politically correct.
Good job though and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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thanks good point
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You're welcome
