Shimmering
Poem 5/7/54 total reviews
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
This is a delightful 5-7-5 and fills me with warmth and happiness at the sight of those sturdy, determined poppies basking under that summer sky. My favourite. Good luck! Debbie
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
This is a delightful 5-7-5 and fills me with warmth and happiness at the sight of those sturdy, determined poppies basking under that summer sky. My favourite. Good luck! Debbie
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from F. William Lester
Love the visual and the summer heat. Nicely written. It's very hot today and I would like to be somewhere cool with lots of colors right now. Well done and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
Love the visual and the summer heat. Nicely written. It's very hot today and I would like to be somewhere cool with lots of colors right now. Well done and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
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You're very welcome.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
First off, the image is nice joining red, poppies in the field
Shimmer is a good word to use for the poppies glistening in the sunlight
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
First off, the image is nice joining red, poppies in the field
Shimmer is a good word to use for the poppies glistening in the sunlight
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. A beautifully written poem that seeps in colorful imagery. The picture is perfect for your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. A beautifully written poem that seeps in colorful imagery. The picture is perfect for your presentation. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
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Thanks for reviewing zanya