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Shimmering

Poem 5/7/5

4 total reviews 
Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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This is a delightful 5-7-5 and fills me with warmth and happiness at the sight of those sturdy, determined poppies basking under that summer sky. My favourite. Good luck! Debbie

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from F. William Lester
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Love the visual and the summer heat. Nicely written. It's very hot today and I would like to be somewhere cool with lots of colors right now. Well done and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 19-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
    Thanks for reading and reviewing zanya
reply by F. William Lester on 28-Jul-2024
    You're very welcome.
Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!

First off, the image is nice joining red, poppies in the field

Shimmer is a good word to use for the poppies glistening in the sunlight

I enjoyed reading your poem

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Thanks for reviewing zanya
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the 5-7-5 poem writing prompt. A beautifully written poem that seeps in colorful imagery. The picture is perfect for your presentation. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2024
    Thanks for reviewing zanya