Seasons
Loop Poetry3 total reviews
Comment from karenina
I like your loop theme... perfect for the "loop" of seasons we endlessly cycle through! I suggest you take a closer look at the contest requirements though.
For THIS loop contest there is a required rhyme scheme of ABCB....
CLICK on the requirements and see the example.
It's a committee contest so you have plenty of time to correct this as it's open until September 7th!
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
I like your loop theme... perfect for the "loop" of seasons we endlessly cycle through! I suggest you take a closer look at the contest requirements though.
For THIS loop contest there is a required rhyme scheme of ABCB....
CLICK on the requirements and see the example.
It's a committee contest so you have plenty of time to correct this as it's open until September 7th!
Karenina
Comment Written 18-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much
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Sure thing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A walk through the seasons in a loop poem here Samantha and I enjoyed the journey.
Suggestion for this line:
Winter is harsh (with) bitter ice.
Love Dolly x
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
A walk through the seasons in a loop poem here Samantha and I enjoyed the journey.
Suggestion for this line:
Winter is harsh (with) bitter ice.
Love Dolly x
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. The four seasons were a perfect subject for a loop poem since that is basically what they are. A giant loop in nature. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
An excellent entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. The four seasons were a perfect subject for a loop poem since that is basically what they are. A giant loop in nature. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
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Thank you