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Seasons

Loop Poetry

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Comment from karenina
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I like your loop theme... perfect for the "loop" of seasons we endlessly cycle through! I suggest you take a closer look at the contest requirements though.

For THIS loop contest there is a required rhyme scheme of ABCB....

CLICK on the requirements and see the example.

It's a committee contest so you have plenty of time to correct this as it's open until September 7th!

Karenina




 Comment Written 18-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 18-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much
reply by karenina on 18-Jul-2024
    Sure thing!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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A walk through the seasons in a loop poem here Samantha and I enjoyed the journey.

Suggestion for this line:
Winter is harsh (with) bitter ice.

Love Dolly x

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you so much 😊
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
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An excellent entry for the Loop Poetry Contest. The four seasons were a perfect subject for a loop poem since that is basically what they are. A giant loop in nature. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 17-Jul-2024
    Thank you