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At The Crime Scene

Two teens play cops.

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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi

This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with!!

This is a goofy story. It made me laugh. Kids are always playing tricks like this on other kids.

I'm not sure adults do that. Maybe some very manipulative ones do to get something they want.

And of course, in movie theaters and TV there are the most manipulative characters one could imagine

Here it is spelled ketchup

" starts believing it's real blood, but it is actually keptchup"

I enjoyed reading her story

Good job. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you!
Comment from jessizero
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I am glad this ended the way it did. I am horrified at the thought of two young boys playing with guns. Things could so easily go wrong. Still, thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.

 Comment Written 20-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 20-Jul-2024
    Thank you!