Heaven's Spice
A Journey Beyond11 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
Hi
This poem gives has good imagery and uses the words well to provide and encouraging view of Heaven,
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hi
This poem gives has good imagery and uses the words well to provide and encouraging view of Heaven,
Good luck in the contest.
Keep writing and stay healthy
Enjoy the rest of the week.
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
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You're welcome, Patty.
Joan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I loved the peace and tranquility in these words a you made Heaven sound like a place worth visiting here, alas there is no turning back once you arrive, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I loved the peace and tranquility in these words a you made Heaven sound like a place worth visiting here, alas there is no turning back once you arrive, a fine post for the contest, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Begin Again
Awesome poem and picture to pair together. And the usage of the words made an added interest. I wish you well in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Awesome poem and picture to pair together. And the usage of the words made an added interest. I wish you well in the contest. Have a great day!
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Jodi Ann Anderson
You nailed it! You took the challenge and greeted it with a smile. You put the words in their perfect spots, and made a beautiful poem! I couldn't have done it any better!
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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You nailed it! You took the challenge and greeted it with a smile. You put the words in their perfect spots, and made a beautiful poem! I couldn't have done it any better!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Barry Penfold
A well put together piece of poetry. Appears to meet the criteria of the contest. I like the image as well. Rhyming very good. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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A well put together piece of poetry. Appears to meet the criteria of the contest. I like the image as well. Rhyming very good. Thanks for sharing. Take care and have a wonderful day.
Regards
Barry Penfold.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Sally Law
Mystery poet, this is the best one I've reviewed for this unique prompt. A beautiful offering, wonderfully crafted and illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and my good wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Mystery poet, this is the best one I've reviewed for this unique prompt. A beautiful offering, wonderfully crafted and illustrated.
Sending you my best today as always, and my good wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!
Comment from Lindsey Russell
This an amazing poem. Congratulations on your achievement! It's beautiful. You have so much talent. This makes me want to see Heaven even more! Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This an amazing poem. Congratulations on your achievement! It's beautiful. You have so much talent. This makes me want to see Heaven even more! Thanks for sharing and happy writing!
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from Brenda Strauser
This is a beautiful poem. The use of all the words is good. I like the words you use. The poem is si descriptive and well written. Good job.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This is a beautiful poem. The use of all the words is good. I like the words you use. The poem is si descriptive and well written. Good job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from LeeAnn Kay
I very very much enjoyed this poem. Very nice and subtle use of the key words and how you kept you flowing. You managed to paint a very vivid and beautiful picture with your poem.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I very very much enjoyed this poem. Very nice and subtle use of the key words and how you kept you flowing. You managed to paint a very vivid and beautiful picture with your poem.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!
Comment from jessizero
I think you did a great job writing this poem with the supplied vocabulary. The last lines were beautiful. I think the picture complemented the poem well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I think you did a great job writing this poem with the supplied vocabulary. The last lines were beautiful. I think the picture complemented the poem well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you!!!