ReJuvenation
ABC poetry27 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This ABC poem, Rejuvenation, has the proper MNOPQ-formatting and sends out a vote for the use of meditation to bring the heat down and find Nirvana. ..........
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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This ABC poem, Rejuvenation, has the proper MNOPQ-formatting and sends out a vote for the use of meditation to bring the heat down and find Nirvana. ..........
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2024
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Thank you, Bill. I apreciate you reading and comments.
Beth
Comment from gansach
What an excellent entry for the ABC Poetry competition. Just looking at the picture and the presentation is relaxing. I like the construction and the rhyme scheme, your words are soothing and well-chosen. Nicely done!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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What an excellent entry for the ABC Poetry competition. Just looking at the picture and the presentation is relaxing. I like the construction and the rhyme scheme, your words are soothing and well-chosen. Nicely done!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
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Thank you for an excellent review. I really appreciate your comments.
Beth
Comment from Neonewman
Yes, we all need to destress. These times we live in are challenging at best. This is a well-crafted ABC poetry contest entry. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Yes, we all need to destress. These times we live in are challenging at best. This is a well-crafted ABC poetry contest entry. Thank you for sharing.
God bless,
Steve
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you Steve. I'm glad you liked the ABC poem. I don't chant or do official yoga but I do like to watch the cloud and let my mind drift.
Beth
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My pleasure.
Comment from Wendy G
A calming poem, reminding us of the importance of peaceful meditation for de-stressing and avoiding mental anxiety and worry. The presentation is also excellent, with calming shades supporting theoverall theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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A calming poem, reminding us of the importance of peaceful meditation for de-stressing and avoiding mental anxiety and worry. The presentation is also excellent, with calming shades supporting theoverall theme. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you Wendy. We all need time to ourselves to relax in a calm and peaceful place.
Beth
Comment from royowen
Yes, balancing one's thoughts really shoul have some sought of foundation, which the quite often have interfering feelings of chance flooding, I guess that's why God warns us against our hearts making our decisions, beautifully written Beth, good luck, great ABC poem, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Yes, balancing one's thoughts really shoul have some sought of foundation, which the quite often have interfering feelings of chance flooding, I guess that's why God warns us against our hearts making our decisions, beautifully written Beth, good luck, great ABC poem, blessings Roy
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you Roy. I'm enjoyed reading you excellent comments.
Beth
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Bless you
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I enjoyed the peace and tranquility in your ABC poem Beth. Quiet meditation is underrated and we should practice this more often as the world can sometimes be in too much chaos outside our door, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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I enjoyed the peace and tranquility in your ABC poem Beth. Quiet meditation is underrated and we should practice this more often as the world can sometimes be in too much chaos outside our door, love Dolly x
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank You Dolly, I'm glad you like this. I have to have so quiet time to reqroup and get my head on straight.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your ABCD poem captures a soothing and introspective message effectively.
Strengths:
1. Clear Theme: The poem focuses on finding peace and relaxation amid stress, which is conveyed clearly through the imagery of meditation and decompression.
2. Structured Flow: The use of the ABCD structure is well-executed, with each line contributing to a cohesive message.
3. Calming Imagery: The words "drift," "decompress," and "quiet meditation" create a calming and reflective mood that aligns well with the theme.
Love it!!
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Your ABCD poem captures a soothing and introspective message effectively.
Strengths:
1. Clear Theme: The poem focuses on finding peace and relaxation amid stress, which is conveyed clearly through the imagery of meditation and decompression.
2. Structured Flow: The use of the ABCD structure is well-executed, with each line contributing to a cohesive message.
3. Calming Imagery: The words "drift," "decompress," and "quiet meditation" create a calming and reflective mood that aligns well with the theme.
Love it!!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thanks again, Patty. I'm sorry It has taken a while to get back answering my reviewers. I truly appreciate your excellent in depth review and the six stars.
Comment from Ulla
Absolutely, Beth. I can totally emphasize with this ABC poem. I have just been through such a period, and I had to take a step back to reconsider and reconcile with my sentiments. You describe it so very well. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Absolutely, Beth. I can totally emphasize with this ABC poem. I have just been through such a period, and I had to take a step back to reconsider and reconcile with my sentiments. You describe it so very well. All the best of luck. Ulla xcx
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you so much Ulla. I really appreciate your comment and the six stars.
Beth
Comment from Ric Myworld
I guess we all need a little quiet time, but too much of it can drive a person crazy. Well, unless the person is already crazy, and then I don't have a clue where it drive them. :-) Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I guess we all need a little quiet time, but too much of it can drive a person crazy. Well, unless the person is already crazy, and then I don't have a clue where it drive them. :-) Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
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I don't really meditate as such. I just take a break and zone and vegetate until I feel like moving again. Don't pay any attention to what I write.
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You are one of the few whose writing and thoughts I pay attention to. :-)
Comment from Natureschild
your poem has a clear and relatable message about the need for relaxation and mindfulness in the face of stress and turmoil. The ABC structure is maintained well, with each line progressing smoothly to the next. The language is straightforward and easy to understand, which suits the poem's calming theme. Phrases like "drift and decompress," "overthink," and "peace become my goal" effectively convey the desired state of mind. Good advise for all of us. - Terry
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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your poem has a clear and relatable message about the need for relaxation and mindfulness in the face of stress and turmoil. The ABC structure is maintained well, with each line progressing smoothly to the next. The language is straightforward and easy to understand, which suits the poem's calming theme. Phrases like "drift and decompress," "overthink," and "peace become my goal" effectively convey the desired state of mind. Good advise for all of us. - Terry
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2024
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Thank you Terry, I appreciate the review and meaningful comments.
Beth
