The Heart As A Darkened Canvas
coloring your soul3 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
You did a great job writing the poem and it will make a great candidate for the contest. You were very descriptive with the "colors" and I wish you luck in the contest. Have a blessed day
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You did a great job writing the poem and it will make a great candidate for the contest. You were very descriptive with the "colors" and I wish you luck in the contest. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 24-Jul-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, The Heart as a Darkened Canvas, speaks well about the hues without actually naming them. The theme of the piece seems to be what enhances or hides one's love from others.
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This poem, The Heart as a Darkened Canvas, speaks well about the hues without actually naming them. The theme of the piece seems to be what enhances or hides one's love from others.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
This poem tackles a profound emotional spectrum using vivid metaphors. The descriptions like "the color of a punch in the stomach" and "the deep stripe of a spear passing through your heart" powerfully convey intense feelings of pain and sorrow without naming colors directly. The imagery of "a sledgehammer slashing through" and "the painting of your soul as it falls apart" further intensifies the emotional impact.
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This poem tackles a profound emotional spectrum using vivid metaphors. The descriptions like "the color of a punch in the stomach" and "the deep stripe of a spear passing through your heart" powerfully convey intense feelings of pain and sorrow without naming colors directly. The imagery of "a sledgehammer slashing through" and "the painting of your soul as it falls apart" further intensifies the emotional impact.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2024