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Dynasty

Kamala embraces her true ancestry

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Comment from Debbie D'Arcy
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Hi Simian, It's good to see you back again. I enjoyed your cheeky and informative post. But I needed your helpful note to explain. I'll be looking out for more now as things heat up. Well done! Debbie

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thanks, Debbie! Based on your note, I moved the explanation to the top of the piece.

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Comment from barbara.wilkey
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You have pushed the limit with this contest entry. It's great. I enjoyed reading and thank you for sharing it with us. I got a laugh. Shame on me. Good luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    LOL glad you enjoyed! I am just getting warmed up for the political season and it's gonna be a wild one : )

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reply by barbara.wilkey on 25-Jul-2024
    It sure is.
Comment from Neonewman
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Ha! Ha!
It's funny that her father's name was close to the same as Donald Trump's. This is a humorous piece you have entered for this contest. Best of luck in the votes.
God bless,
Steve

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2024
    Thanks Steve, yes when reading about her dad a couple years ago I knew this moment would come someday.

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Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
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Hi, I'm sorry for 4stars because I was confused with your opening line, "Kamala embraces her true ancestry," and stated in your "Dynasty," but your 5-7-5 Writing Prompt is all about Donald Trump which in this incase I did not get it. I used to read almost all subjects go hand in hand starting from a title to an opening statement down to a full description of the body paragraph topic that all stick to the same point. Although, I wish you all the best of luck, and I'm looking forward more to read your writing.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2024


reply by the author on 23-Jul-2024
    Hi, if you read the notes at the bottom, it mentions that Kamala's father is a post-Keynesian economist named Donald J. Harris. That is the basis for the joke.

    Regards,

    SS