Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus

Good

Hi, I'm sorry for a 4 star on this piece of your. There are several reasons to why 4 star? I feel the phrases had been used in a song lyric by Sherrie Shines, "You Put Sunshine in My Day," Honestly, I do not know how to rate the words or phrases that already had been used, and it's not totally original from the writer. Also, even these phrases are too common that I heard people went around saying it to each other in the conversations, "I love the sunshine, Why Do I Love You." My 4 star rate for your efforts, and I wish you all the best!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem and leave your comment. I will admit that I listen to a lot of music and that frequently my writing is inspired by a song but in this case, I am not aware of any songs coming along to inspire this one. It was just a from the heart moment I wrote. If it did remind you of a song, maybe that's not a bad thing. I do appreciate your thoughts and thank you once again for leaving them.

Comment from Lindsey Russell

Excellent

Well, you met the challenge of this contest very well. Such a sweet entry! It sends a clear message of love. Good luck with the contest and happy writing!!

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2024

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2024

Thank you.