Good morning little one
The poem of a baby bird I saw in a tree next to the house14 total reviews
Comment from barbara.wilkey
Thank you for sharing this adorable photograph and contest entry with us. Yes, this is about a baby bird, but it could also be about any baby. They all grow up so fast. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing this adorable photograph and contest entry with us. Yes, this is about a baby bird, but it could also be about any baby. They all grow up so fast. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 18-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Karen Cherry Threadgill
Nice picture. Pity you did not get the very beginning of his life. Your writing is very well done. I enjoy reading your work. It is back to unpacking all those boxes. Karen
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Nice picture. Pity you did not get the very beginning of his life. Your writing is very well done. I enjoy reading your work. It is back to unpacking all those boxes. Karen
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Hi Karen thank you so much for this great review and the six stars. I enjoyed reading your writing too. Brenda
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Comment from Ginda Simpson
There is such sweetness in your words as you so tenderly portray this new life waiting to grow and be free. And then, the empty nest signifying that its life has taken flight. Well done.
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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There is such sweetness in your words as you so tenderly portray this new life waiting to grow and be free. And then, the empty nest signifying that its life has taken flight. Well done.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review!
Comment from Begin Again
Isn't Mother Nature so wonderful and inspiring? To share the birth of a little robin and watch it achieve it's growth and fly away from home so fast, yet such a miraculous event. Life is such a pleasant surprise.
Smiles, Carol
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Isn't Mother Nature so wonderful and inspiring? To share the birth of a little robin and watch it achieve it's growth and fly away from home so fast, yet such a miraculous event. Life is such a pleasant surprise.
Smiles, Carol
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your nice review.
Comment from June Sargent
This is a lovely poem about your connection to a baby bird. But it can also describe the bond of a mother and her child - especially when they're old enough to leave home to spread their wings. I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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This is a lovely poem about your connection to a baby bird. But it can also describe the bond of a mother and her child - especially when they're old enough to leave home to spread their wings. I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for nice review
Comment from Marilyn Hamilton
An excellent entry for the No Rules Poetry Contest. The photo is wonderful and the poem tells us the full story. I liked the repetition of the one line. I hope you are able to watch when it flies away. We got to watch baby cardinals grow up in a tree in our front yard and saw them on the day they left the nest. It was amazing. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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An excellent entry for the No Rules Poetry Contest. The photo is wonderful and the poem tells us the full story. I liked the repetition of the one line. I hope you are able to watch when it flies away. We got to watch baby cardinals grow up in a tree in our front yard and saw them on the day they left the nest. It was amazing. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Marilyn. For the great review. It is truly amazing to watch them grow.
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Thank you Marilyn. For the great review. It is truly amazing to watch them grow.
Comment from royowen
They are so vulnerable at the youthful age as this little bird is at, they are so vulnerable and hopefully will live a full and fruitful life, I love this photo of the little chick, needy and dependent, well done, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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They are so vulnerable at the youthful age as this little bird is at, they are so vulnerable and hopefully will live a full and fruitful life, I love this photo of the little chick, needy and dependent, well done, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for the nice review.
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Thank you for the nice review.
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Welcome
Comment from gansach
This is a very nice entry for the No Rules poetry competition. We had a nest of robins above a rain spout next to a porch door which we could observe through the kitchen window. It was fun watching them grow. I like the repetition of the line Mama will be back soon indicating he still needs help to grow and survive until he disappears into the world on his own. Lovely poem!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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This is a very nice entry for the No Rules poetry competition. We had a nest of robins above a rain spout next to a porch door which we could observe through the kitchen window. It was fun watching them grow. I like the repetition of the line Mama will be back soon indicating he still needs help to grow and survive until he disappears into the world on his own. Lovely poem!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your great review. It is so amazing to see them grow.
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Thank you for your great review. It is so amazing to see them grow.
Comment from Madeleine Mardis
Brenda, I love this poem! Wow, what a great picture! What a huge mouth! You are so great at conveying the wonderful connection you have with nature, and your deep respect and love for God's critters! Especially birdies! Maddy
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Brenda, I love this poem! Wow, what a great picture! What a huge mouth! You are so great at conveying the wonderful connection you have with nature, and your deep respect and love for God's critters! Especially birdies! Maddy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you Maddy for the great review. I think nature is so amazing!
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Thank you Maddy for the great review. I think nature is so amazing!
Comment from EvitaP
I really enjoyed this piece. It remind me when I had a bird nest on my patio momma would come and go a few days the baby had feathers growing another few days it was gone. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I really enjoyed this piece. It remind me when I had a bird nest on my patio momma would come and go a few days the baby had feathers growing another few days it was gone. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you for your nice review.