Life Is A Story
tetractys contest5 total reviews
Comment from zanya
The moon and its moonbeams are mesmerising to us humans instilling powerful thoughts and reflections on life. awakening profound emotions - lovely pic.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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The moon and its moonbeams are mesmerising to us humans instilling powerful thoughts and reflections on life. awakening profound emotions - lovely pic.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entrance for the contest. Good luck with that!'
This is a good little poem for this contest. I wish I wasn't legally blind because I have to keep having to go down here to the review window back up to your poem enlarge the poem come back down to the review window, which immediately shrinks the review window again And in the reviewing is
Anyway, I'm getting a magnifying glass. Yippee.
At first, I thought you should say depths of the soul because in depths means something totally different than in depth but then I realized that you might mean the same thing either way
I'm not sure. But in a novel or a short story, you would definitely need to say in depths. This poetry requires a different license
The moon is mysterious in all her ways, including getting down to the depths of a soul
Your poem spoke to me
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entrance for the contest. Good luck with that!'
This is a good little poem for this contest. I wish I wasn't legally blind because I have to keep having to go down here to the review window back up to your poem enlarge the poem come back down to the review window, which immediately shrinks the review window again And in the reviewing is
Anyway, I'm getting a magnifying glass. Yippee.
At first, I thought you should say depths of the soul because in depths means something totally different than in depth but then I realized that you might mean the same thing either way
I'm not sure. But in a novel or a short story, you would definitely need to say in depths. This poetry requires a different license
The moon is mysterious in all her ways, including getting down to the depths of a soul
Your poem spoke to me
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Comment from royowen
I think we sometimes hide behind a facade of armour, hiding what lies beneath with an steel plated defence that betrays the vulnerable under belly. Beautifully written entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I think we sometimes hide behind a facade of armour, hiding what lies beneath with an steel plated defence that betrays the vulnerable under belly. Beautifully written entry in this contest, well done, good luck, blessings Roy
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
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Pleasure
Comment from jessizero
I admire this lovely poem you have written here. You got the syllable counts right for the contest, and I loved the way you formatted the font and background colors. The picture was beautiful, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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I admire this lovely poem you have written here. You got the syllable counts right for the contest, and I loved the way you formatted the font and background colors. The picture was beautiful, as well. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Comment from Sally Law
Of all the entries in this contest, this is my favorite. It's so deep and profound, and with the Black & White photography, it pushes it over the top. The winner in this race!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Of all the entries in this contest, this is my favorite. It's so deep and profound, and with the Black & White photography, it pushes it over the top. The winner in this race!
Sending you my best today as always, and my very best wishes for the upcoming vote.
Sally Law :))
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
