heaven Bound
Thankful I am saved2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem conveys a deep sense of gratitude and reverence. The simplicity and directness of the lines effectively communicate a heartfelt appreciation for divine intervention and salvation.
The structure of your poem, with its concise and straightforward progression from "God" to "hell, where I would go if not for him," emphasizes the significance of faith and redemption in your life. This clear and honest expression of thankfulness is powerful and relatable, offering a poignant reflection on the impact of spiritual belief.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Your poem conveys a deep sense of gratitude and reverence. The simplicity and directness of the lines effectively communicate a heartfelt appreciation for divine intervention and salvation.
The structure of your poem, with its concise and straightforward progression from "God" to "hell, where I would go if not for him," emphasizes the significance of faith and redemption in your life. This clear and honest expression of thankfulness is powerful and relatable, offering a poignant reflection on the impact of spiritual belief.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
Comment from jessizero
This was a wonderful tetractys for the contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I absolutely loved your message. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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This was a wonderful tetractys for the contest. You got the syllable counts right, and I absolutely loved your message. Thank you for sharing, and best wishes to you.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2024
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Thank you
