Prices vs Budget
We want to eat a decent meal, but who can afford it?3 total reviews
Comment from Rachelle Allen
Well, this is what happens when politicians build back better, I guess!! I know I'M feeling all kinds of better about our economy, and it appears you are, as well.
Good luck in the competition!! xo
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Well, this is what happens when politicians build back better, I guess!! I know I'M feeling all kinds of better about our economy, and it appears you are, as well.
Good luck in the competition!! xo
Comment Written 28-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Oh, yes. Well, we never know until too late if what they do will work, unfortunately. Too bad we don't have the ability to see into the future.
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That's where a little dose of Common Sense would be a wonderful commodity!
Comment from Pamusart
Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Maybe we should become vegetarians, although food prices for cheese and milk and vegetables and eggs have all gone up as well
But this is a very cute poem where all lines rhyme with each other
This is a good poem to get more people to become vegetarians or vegans anyway
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Hi
This looks like a good entry for the contest. Good luck with that!!
Maybe we should become vegetarians, although food prices for cheese and milk and vegetables and eggs have all gone up as well
But this is a very cute poem where all lines rhyme with each other
This is a good poem to get more people to become vegetarians or vegans anyway
I enjoyed reading your poem
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Thanks! Yes, no choice is good these days.
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem takes a playful approach to discussing the joy and challenge of enjoying meat as a treat. The rhythmic pattern and simple rhyme scheme work well to convey a light-hearted tone. The line "Good to eat / Can not be beat" effectively highlights the appeal of meat, while the concluding lines bring a touch of realism by addressing the disparity between desire and budget.
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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Your poem takes a playful approach to discussing the joy and challenge of enjoying meat as a treat. The rhythmic pattern and simple rhyme scheme work well to convey a light-hearted tone. The line "Good to eat / Can not be beat" effectively highlights the appeal of meat, while the concluding lines bring a touch of realism by addressing the disparity between desire and budget.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2024
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I was trying to be light-hearted, but honestly I have to make meals for 3 - 6 people out of nothing more often than I care to mention. Thanks for reviewing.
