A Walk Into Life
How you become part of your walk.2 total reviews
Comment from Patty Mazzurco
Your poem offers a concise and motivational message about perseverance and the journey toward one's dreams. The simplicity and directness of the language emphasize the importance of steady progress and commitment. The imagery of placing one foot in front of the other effectively conveys the notion of continual effort leading to fulfillment. For added depth, you might consider exploring more vivid imagery or expanding on the metaphor of the path and dreams. Overall, it's a powerful reminder of the value of persistence.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Your poem offers a concise and motivational message about perseverance and the journey toward one's dreams. The simplicity and directness of the language emphasize the importance of steady progress and commitment. The imagery of placing one foot in front of the other effectively conveys the notion of continual effort leading to fulfillment. For added depth, you might consider exploring more vivid imagery or expanding on the metaphor of the path and dreams. Overall, it's a powerful reminder of the value of persistence.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you so much!!!!
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
What a wonderufl way to to describe the journey toward achieving our dreams. I love how you share that steady progress, no matter how small, is the key. I thought your word choices were excellent. So well written.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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What a wonderufl way to to describe the journey toward achieving our dreams. I love how you share that steady progress, no matter how small, is the key. I thought your word choices were excellent. So well written.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2024
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2024
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Thank you!