Ol' Silver and Red
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Ol' Silver and Red, ch 9"Medeival Ohmie and the dragon Ol' Silver and Red
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Comment from lyenochka
Now that was some heart-pounding, action-packed scene! I am glad that Princess May landed just where she needed to be to rescue Ohmie. I think her royal parents will be pleased when the truth of Ohmie's true identity is revealed.
One question:
Ohmie suddenly wisped from the room, (whisked?)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Now that was some heart-pounding, action-packed scene! I am glad that Princess May landed just where she needed to be to rescue Ohmie. I think her royal parents will be pleased when the truth of Ohmie's true identity is revealed.
One question:
Ohmie suddenly wisped from the room, (whisked?)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you.
I'll do a little wispy research. I can see whisk, but also vanish like wispy fog.
Comment from Carol Hillebrenner
I'm not certain I could visualize how Ohmie got out of the cave, but Princess May pumped his lungs dry, and they were both very happy. Did he or Blado get away with any of the treasure?
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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I'm not certain I could visualize how Ohmie got out of the cave, but Princess May pumped his lungs dry, and they were both very happy. Did he or Blado get away with any of the treasure?
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2024
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Thank you for your very nice review.
Just enough treasure to prove they were there and to tempt them for more.
Comment from jim vecchio
Please forgive any tardiness. I was without my computer for much of the day. I'm hurrying through tons of messages. I don't want to slight you but at least I wanted to rate you. Your story is coming along very fine!
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Please forgive any tardiness. I was without my computer for much of the day. I'm hurrying through tons of messages. I don't want to slight you but at least I wanted to rate you. Your story is coming along very fine!
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much!
I worried a bit that readers would 'buy' the catgut/rope thing.
And thank you immensely for the six stars!
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Your works are always six-worthy.
Comment from Pamusart
Hi, Wayne
I like this far-fetched story. I'm glad ohmie and May got together.
I'm glad that they've disabled the dragon, but it sounds like he's still at big danger
I'm not sure how May got to ohmie that isn't explained
I'm tired of mentioning him because my microphone always misspelled it and I have to go back and fix it so from now on I'm gonna call him he and him
So he has a broken arm dislocated shoulder, and he still can be rescued. Plus he drowned and getting the water out is not always an option. Some people die when they drown, especially when they drown as much as he did.
I enjoyed reading your book
lchapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Hi, Wayne
I like this far-fetched story. I'm glad ohmie and May got together.
I'm glad that they've disabled the dragon, but it sounds like he's still at big danger
I'm not sure how May got to ohmie that isn't explained
I'm tired of mentioning him because my microphone always misspelled it and I have to go back and fix it so from now on I'm gonna call him he and him
So he has a broken arm dislocated shoulder, and he still can be rescued. Plus he drowned and getting the water out is not always an option. Some people die when they drown, especially when they drown as much as he did.
I enjoyed reading your book
lchapter
Good job. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you very much.
Ohmie's shoulder became dislocated by the rope tied to his arm. The dragon pulled him all the way from the cave to the lake where May dove into the water to rescue him. (I'll go back and make certain that the picture is complete.)
As far as not drowning, thank May and fiction!
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Comment from Lakeshia Richardson
Thank you for sharing your story with the community. I thought that this chapter was very well written. I am interested in the entire story up to this point and I hope that I can locate it on your page. I am hoping to get a full understanding of the story.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you for sharing your story with the community. I thought that this chapter was very well written. I am interested in the entire story up to this point and I hope that I can locate it on your page. I am hoping to get a full understanding of the story.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you so very, very much!
And for the six stars.
Ol' Silver and Red should be on top in my portfolio.
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Thank you for helping by telling me the location so that it will be easier for me to navigate and find the story when I go to your page. Keep writing great stories.
Comment from Ric Myworld
The crew is making headway, or maybe it's wing or tail way against the dragon, and I'm glad they all made it home safely, or somewhat safely. It's hard to believe that it's only Tuesday and this cowboy is all out of bullets, but for those of us who read a lot of people, they just don't give us enough. They need a system that allots stars according to how many people or post we read. I mean, if I read 100 people, and Joe blow Mcgillicutty reads 20, is it fair they get the same number of stars to share? Oh, well, sorry for the ramble. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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The crew is making headway, or maybe it's wing or tail way against the dragon, and I'm glad they all made it home safely, or somewhat safely. It's hard to believe that it's only Tuesday and this cowboy is all out of bullets, but for those of us who read a lot of people, they just don't give us enough. They need a system that allots stars according to how many people or post we read. I mean, if I read 100 people, and Joe blow Mcgillicutty reads 20, is it fair they get the same number of stars to share? Oh, well, sorry for the ramble. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you!
100% on. (stars)
I need 2 votes when there are more than 10 contest entries (1st/2nd)
Comment from BethShelby
This is quite a tail of adventure. It seems like Omni got pretty beat up in the cave with the dragon. It is good that he has a lady ready to love him and help him to heal.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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This is quite a tail of adventure. It seems like Omni got pretty beat up in the cave with the dragon. It is good that he has a lady ready to love him and help him to heal.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2024
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Thank you. Yes, Ohmie and may need one another. (and Blado) smiley face here
