Digital
Ode 5/7/53 total reviews
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. I took my granddaughter to the beach, just the other day, to unwind and take her mind off all her worries. With so much technology, kids nowadays don't know how to play. It's really sad. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. I took my granddaughter to the beach, just the other day, to unwind and take her mind off all her worries. With so much technology, kids nowadays don't know how to play. It's really sad. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Great review and sharing interesting ideas, zanya
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You're welcome
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
That's a beautifully poem! I love how your poem captures the timeless way the simple activities are the classic and never seem to fail. I really enjoyed the message and how you wrote it.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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That's a beautifully poem! I love how your poem captures the timeless way the simple activities are the classic and never seem to fail. I really enjoyed the message and how you wrote it.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Great review zanya
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Digital, has the proper formatting and allows that the simple skill of constructing a castle in the sand can still prove entertaining to builders and observers.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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This 5-7-5, Digital, has the proper formatting and allows that the simple skill of constructing a castle in the sand can still prove entertaining to builders and observers.
Comment Written 13-Aug-2024
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2024
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Thanks for reading zanya