Ode to the Saviour
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Comment from iDri.Luv.Jesus
That's great, Amen to your writing, love it! All syllables are met, and your words choices are excellent! Too bad that you did not have an artwork piece add to it, although, I wish you all the best!
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That's great, Amen to your writing, love it! All syllables are met, and your words choices are excellent! Too bad that you did not have an artwork piece add to it, although, I wish you all the best!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from Teri7
This is a really great and well worded 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You used great and very true words about our Savior. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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This is a really great and well worded 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You used great and very true words about our Savior. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from bonespur
This seems like a good candidate for the contest. Jesus christ is baring the stains of our sins although some of us should have to bare the stain. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
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This seems like a good candidate for the contest. Jesus christ is baring the stains of our sins although some of us should have to bare the stain. Good job and good luck. Have a blessed day
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from Michael Ludwinder
That's powerful and thought provoking! I thought you did a wonderful job of sharing your love of our Savior. Your word choices are excellent. Great job!
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That's powerful and thought provoking! I thought you did a wonderful job of sharing your love of our Savior. Your word choices are excellent. Great job!
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Ode to the Savior, has the proper formatting and seems to ask a question as to the power of the God of the Universe to save a soul in peril.
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This 5-7-5, Ode to the Savior, has the proper formatting and seems to ask a question as to the power of the God of the Universe to save a soul in peril.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2024